If I, then would you?

If I, then would you?

A Poem by Ace Jaxon

If words lost meaning then pain would leave, but also new life.

If I could say the truth of my feelings would you listen?

If everyone found out, would you stand beside me?

If Christmas snowed away, would you drift with it?

If I could hold you, would you hold me too?

If I told you, would you say it too?

If dreams came, would you fade?

If I ran, would you chase?

If I said the three, would you say them back?

If I whispered from across the way, would you hear?

If I left, would you leave too?

If I say it now, would you know it was you?

If I said “I love you,” would you see the truth?


If you say it too, I’ll say it again.

If you say the truth, I’d always listen.

If everyone knew, I jump in front of you.

If Christmas drifted, I’d stay.

If you ran, I’d chase.

© 2017 Ace Jaxon


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A wonderful poem my friend.
"If Christmas drifted, I’d stay.
If you ran, I’d chase."
I loved the complete poem and the above lines. Perfect ending to the poetry. Thank you Ne for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ace Jaxon

6 Years Ago

I'm glad you enjoyed those lines, they were actually the reason I wrote the poem the way I did. Than.. read more
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

I did enjoy and you are welcome Ne.



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Wow. It has depth in it. It expresses that how you are expecting because you would do what you expect. I really liked it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ace Jaxon

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your review, it means a lot.
Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

You're welcome.
A wonderful poem my friend.
"If Christmas drifted, I’d stay.
If you ran, I’d chase."
I loved the complete poem and the above lines. Perfect ending to the poetry. Thank you Ne for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ace Jaxon

6 Years Ago

I'm glad you enjoyed those lines, they were actually the reason I wrote the poem the way I did. Than.. read more
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

I did enjoy and you are welcome Ne.
So many questions when it comes to love. I have found myself asking many of these. I relate to your work beyond belief. your an outstanding writer, its a pleasure to read your poems. thank you.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ace Jaxon

6 Years Ago

You're welcome, I'm happy someone enjoys my writing. I wouldn't consider myself outstanding, I think.. read more

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Added on December 21, 2017
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Ace Jaxon
Ace Jaxon

Dassel, MN



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