Winter and Summer tears

Snow falls as my eyes dry

An old friend starts to cry

A moon falls 

A star crawls

Winter turns to cold

Summer starts to take hold

The sun sets and the clouds turn to broken hearts

broken hearts become broken minds

then someone starts to wonder why

I gave them an old dime

As time resets and summer turns cold may winter take hold

Author's Note

this poem doesn't need to be good to me, i wrote it for me that's all that matters right now......

Reviews

[John the Baptist]

I am not sure this poem has any particular meaning, and really, it doesn't have to. It seems to reflect a changing of moods, the poet free associating to achieve this effect. The overall mood is somber, almost a mourning at the instability of life. I liked the spareness of expression and use of imagery. Well done.

[Ace Jaxon]

These words were written yesterday to try and calm myself down .... a lot of stuff happened yesterday to me and all I could think of was to write, and the poem is to tell my story of a winter where show never falls but chose to, and a girl who was abused by her friends..... so if it sounds like that then it means i achieved my goal... thank you for your review, I'm glad someone liked it...

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You use impressive symbols to show bitter experiences.there is nice flow and short poem make this even more visible.

[Ace Jaxon]

thank you for your review

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You welcome.