A poem for my love

Just a poem I wrote for someone I really care about, may be terrible, may not.

For once upon the diamond stars

Just above a silver moon

Shines something almost as beautiful as you

I know you’ll struggle to say it’s true

But you and I both know the truth

Stars and Moons could not compare

From the start you had by heart

Even though It’s brittle and bear

The truth beloved is right here

I bestow a voice of joyus triumph

As I tell you my end may come

But before I shall be done

I wish to say one final word

From sea to sky

From dusk to dawn

From prince to king

I’d like to say

That my love is an eternal thing

Struggles have come to write

Just like these words tonight

I wish to tell you with my might

I love to see your everlasting light

Author's Note

Please don't hate on my poetry. May be extremely bad and not even a poem, but I view it as one. Also if there is a grammar problem please ignore it, and read the whole piece.

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

hi still love this thanks for entering my love competition, good luck!

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

I thank you for entering into my competition you are a poet and not ‘bad ‘as you described above don’t put yourself down I loved it thanks

[Project022]

Woah.. what a breath taking piece. The words are very simple but at the same time so meaningful. I see and feel the love you put into this. It's just so amazing it's hard to put into words. Amazing job please keep it up ^^

[Ace Jaxon]

thankyou so much

[Neville]

A delightful love poem for a woman obviously well loved, certainly well written.......All Good Things, Neville

[Ace Jaxon]

Thank you!

[Neville]

My pleasure.......

[Najam Us Saher]

I like your thoughts, the way you captured her beauty by comparing it with moon. I felt enchanting to read this. Thank you for such a wonderful poem.

[Ace Jaxon]

thank you so much

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.

[My Friend Pops]

Terrific thoughts and feelings, you have put on page what many can not.

[Ace Jaxon]

you all have no clue how much that means to me

[Ja]

A poem of love it is
It requires no analysis
Words are written with such grace
That any woman would embrace

Thank you for sharing

[Ace Jaxon]

Thank you and I plan on sharing it with the woman of my dreams