Ash Wednesday

Original Religious Poetry

Dear Father God

Rub your ashes on my forehead in a sign of a cross

To remind me of your Son Jesus Christ

As I repent of all the sins I have commited

I continue this period of spiritual discipline

Clean my thoughts and make me an Arch Angel

Where I promise to always push to hell all demons and lost ghosts

In the Name Of Your Son Jesus Christ and The Holy Spirit

I kneel in front of You and Your Son

Amen

Author's Note

Artist Of The Kneeling Angel Drawing: Gianlorenzo Bernini (1598 - 1680)

Reviews

[Kamari's]

A religious poem very unique I must say. It is very well wrote you manage to capture what humanity should pray for . I admire you for most writers might not post a religious piece as this which tells me you are brave . This poem is a lot in a few words as a message to the rest of us perhaps do the same and for someone so young ready to take this vow you write of is a true testament not only to your writing but you as a person I hope you get what you ask for dear one and keep writing dear for people need to see this type of writing in this day and age.

[Roshan Nair]

Great write about an ever greater day..you truly captured the spirit of ash Wednesday in this poem. I haven't been around much of the religious services for it off late, but i get the power of your words in the vein you have intended it. Good job! cheers

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you Roshan Nair for your valuable interpretation and really like your review.

[Marie]

Unremarkable.

You misspelled "promise."

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank You Marie for your valuable interpretation, I promise will correct that word

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Love the visual with the piece; so fitting. Your words are spiritually genuine.

FT

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank You Much FT Ledrew for your valuable interpretation and am glad you liked my writing, I am really a religious writer and since I started writing most of my writings have been about battleling and stopping demons and lost ghosts from infiltrating Heaven.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a very spiritual write...i think you mean "I kneel in front of you"

trying to get rid of those demons----ah, they are persistent.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you Jacob for your valuable interpretation and you are right it is our duty as humans to stop those demons from infiltrating Heaven.