Ash Wednesday

Original Religious Poetry

Dear Father God

Rub your ashes on my forehead in a sign of a cross

To remind me of your Son Jesus Christ

As I repent of all the sins I have commited

I continue this period of spiritual discipline

Clean my thoughts and make me an Arch Angel

Where I promise to always push to hell all demons and lost ghosts

In the Name Of Your Son Jesus Christ and The Holy Spirit

I kneel in front of You and Your Son

Amen

Author's Note

Artist Of The Kneeling Angel Drawing: Gianlorenzo Bernini (1598 - 1680)

Reviews

[Kamari's]

A religious poem very unique I must say. It is very well wrote you manage to capture what humanity should pray for . I admire you for most writers might not post a religious piece as this which tells me you are brave . This poem is a lot in a few words as a message to the rest of us perhaps do the same and for someone so young ready to take this vow you write of is a true testament not only to your writing but you as a person I hope you get what you ask for dear one and keep writing dear for people need to see this type of writing in this day and age.

[Daniel Whitaker]

Very beautiful, I really enjoyed it.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank You for your interpretation I really am glad you liked it.

[Ngoc M. Nguyen]

Beautiful. Sincere. And honest.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank You for your valuable interpretation, I like how you described it three words

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Strong conviction here from one who seems to know what is right.
What stands out is the explanation of what faith is without having
to declare that it exists.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank You Zeitgeist Manifesto For your real intelligent review, I really like it
"What stands out is the explanation of what faith is without having
to declare that it exists."

[Mr_M]

A very stunning poem. You don't have to be religious to enjoy this piece.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you I really do appreciate your interpretation and comment

[Obscured by the Shadows]

Wow, this is a very powerful poem. Though I am not religious, I think that this isa very strong show of faith in your religion, I enjoyed it. Great writing.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank You Much for your interpretation and opinion dear writer

[AaronFreitas]

Beautiful poem... thanks for sharing :)

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank You AaronFreitas for your review

[AaronFreitas]

You are very welcome :)

[dan]

Well, from my Catholic upbringing I know that this is Ash Wednesday, and the ceremonial distribution of ashes on foreheads used to be a regular yearly ritual when I was a practicing Catholic. I admire your show of faith. take care...dan

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank You Mr dan for your review and am happy that you reviewed my Catholic poem at the beginning I didnt know how to write it until I contacted My Father God.

[dan]

It was my pleasure, thank you. dan

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

It's a beautiful prayer. Very biblical and Christian.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank You for your valuable interpretation Miss Nadia and I am happy that you liked the prayer.

[Bear]

A very powerful work of art, it should leave an impression on the mind of all who read it, thank you for sharing.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you for your valuable interpretation Mr Bear I really do appreciate your review.