Ash Wednesday

Original Religious Poetry

Dear Father God

Rub your ashes on my forehead in a sign of a cross

To remind me of your Son Jesus Christ

As I repent of all the sins I have commited

I continue this period of spiritual discipline

Clean my thoughts and make me an Arch Angel

Where I promise to always push to hell all demons and lost ghosts

In the Name Of Your Son Jesus Christ and The Holy Spirit

I kneel in front of You and Your Son

Amen

Author's Note

Artist Of The Kneeling Angel Drawing: Gianlorenzo Bernini (1598 - 1680)

Reviews

[Kamari's]

A religious poem very unique I must say. It is very well wrote you manage to capture what humanity should pray for . I admire you for most writers might not post a religious piece as this which tells me you are brave . This poem is a lot in a few words as a message to the rest of us perhaps do the same and for someone so young ready to take this vow you write of is a true testament not only to your writing but you as a person I hope you get what you ask for dear one and keep writing dear for people need to see this type of writing in this day and age.

[m.s.early]

Striking and powerful and passionate and moving

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Wow!
Very well written and it touched me,
Can I just say though, you have potential!
My favorite part was, "Rub your ashes on my forehead in a sign of a cross
To remind me of your Son Jesus Christ
As I repent of all the sins I have commited
I continue this period of spiritual discipline"
Please continue to write and read!
Can you by chance look at my story The Blonde Girl, It would really mean a lot to me.
Your new fan,

C. Lee Battaglia

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chu..]

This indeed a religious poetry with deep allusion from the bible. I appreciated the flow of wordings. You really elevated God and his supremacy and power to forgive sin. Well written.

[RANJANKUMAR DESAI]

Can there be any better poetry than this . It gives a message whole of humanity . May the representives of Gods of all the communities bless you and inspire better creation .
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[pvpd sri harsha]

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[Adam Whitworth]

Half the leaves are on the tree and half are on the ground
such commonplace facts seem hardly worth commenting on
but they are our purchase if we mean to climb
humility is learning to see with our eyes, not our minds

[Saddam]

Clean my thoughts and make me an Arch Angel
Where I promise to always push to hell all demons and lost ghosts
In the Name Of Your Son Jesus Christ and The Holy Spirit
I kneel in front of You and Your Son
Amen
Amen............

[Project Mayhem]

I read this the voices of a church reciting this lol. It's a good poem/prayer even for a non religious guy like me