The Arch Angel

The Arch Angel

She is crying again

The girl sits through the night

Tears stream down her beautiful puffy face

How much can she take?

She might grasp grip

She looks at her face in the mirror and

Sees an ugly with no body

A spirit who might try to posses her

She is pushed near the edge

And starts screaming for help

And prays to Arch Angel

"Where once I saw a cliff

Descending down I wanted

Single I was

With no one helping

The rising hand from below

Is offering to start pulling

HELP ME BEFORE I JUMP"

Author's Note

In life words are important when persons commit suicide they go to hell because it was the demons voices that convinced them to join them.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

man! what a cry for help this is .. the pain cuts to the quick .. praying for those hurting souls and hearts right now .. an important poem ..
E.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you for your valuable interpretation the poem shows an escenario when bullies operate in groups versus single persons because they want the person to join them so their group grows and they can move to annoy someone else and as long as the person doesnt join them then the bullies are stuck there.

[A. Amos]

This read was epic and like watching a movie, you're message is honest and strong. Life is all about finding yourself not hiding in darkness. Keep spreading the awareness my friend!

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you for your interpretation A. Amos and I strongly believe that demons are responsible for encouraging groups of bullies to interfere in the normal patterns of single persons.

[A. Amos]

I 100% agree with you and you're most welcome!

[joshua deathdealer]

I have battled these demons and they are relentless. I am thankful for Angels and for poems such as these to shed light on their devious intentions. Well done.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you for your valuable review the good thing is to report them in poetry so that other writers dont get confuse and become aware of them and they dont fall pray to the "relentless" lies that demons use to try to confuse the living.

They are lost souls that did not battle when they were alive and that is why they were turned into demons and now they want to try to annoy the living because they are mad at the world, they usually look for sitting ducks that are thinking because they want to get into their thoughts to try to posses them, they usually hang around in groups as bullies because they cant do it by themselves.

[Blogger]

Well done! I like how this is arranged. Seems professional.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you for your review and compliment, in life words are important, when persons commit suicide they go to hell because it was the demons voices that convinced them to join them.

[Blogger]

thank you for the additional insight. I appreciate that and I read it again.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

If bullies demons decide to assault a person tomorrow there is no Arch Angel Saint Michael to read their intentions on earth to stop them'

[Blogger]

Its scary isnt it. We all need faith.

[Mark]

I offer my hand... she is not ugly, that's just the demon looking back...

Jacob :) it is the possibility of love of course! (but then... you know that;)

[SquinklaPsyOps]

You are correct "that's just the demon looking back" is a demon that has possesed her mind and wants to posses her body and that is why she does not see the beauty in the mirror formed by evil old ladies that envy her youth and attitude and want to push her down with their comments.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

demons want us to jump into the abyss...their hands offering..

and often we get so down on life we just feel like jumping in.

i have been there, and i wonder what it really is that pulls us back from the edge.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you for your interpretation many demons exist whose jobs are to pull persons to the edge of suicide and we could get out of that situation by ourselves because angels are cowards to help us.

[Ashira Macy]

This tells a beautiful sad tale, and could be taken as full of metaphor, or as a fantasy piece. I like that you left it open at the end, her fate put into each reader's hands. Well done.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you for your review it could be about a girl that is annoyed by demons (bullies) to commit suicide and where are the so called angels that most persons would not dare insult to help her.