The Arch Angel

The Arch Angel

She is crying again

The girl sits through the night

Tears stream down her beautiful puffy face

How much can she take?

She might grasp grip

She looks at her face in the mirror and

Sees an ugly with no body

A spirit who might try to posses her

She is pushed near the edge

And starts screaming for help

And prays to Arch Angel

"Where once I saw a cliff

Descending down I wanted

Single I was

With no one helping

The rising hand from below

Is offering to start pulling

HELP ME BEFORE I JUMP"

Author's Note

In life words are important when persons commit suicide they go to hell because it was the demons voices that convinced them to join them.

Reviews

[fireblossom]

When persons commit suicide they are driven by depression, very terrible circumstance or mental illness. A loving God does not even think about allowing a place of eternal torment. I believe in angels and demon's but I don't believe in the fear tactics of traditional religion. Those fear tactics were designed to control the masses not lead people to a loving Creator. :-)

With that said, I will review your poem. It is well done. It has power, tension and resolution. Well written.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you for your interpretation the poem is written as an scenario presentation about how bullies intentions are to deviate normal persons lifes.

[The Archangel Gabriel]

Oh, I think you are confused. There is no realm of eternal punishment, hell, I think. That is unjust and for anything allowed unless people do it to themselves. I stand for this, and my power in magic was not defeated. You should know the truth of that, and we can probably prove it. I miss you, and I have not heard you send anything back to me. I will watch over you and think you are wonderful. This place might be under attack by magic. I got the vision you wrote back three times. If you wrote back on something, I can't see it. Could your complain to management, and tell them you like magic working on the website that THEY ALLOW for our privacy to fight the magic if it is true? I send them help and magic that makes this mostly work, I guess, but under attack by Microsoft with bad operating system that allows the government on and also magic, proabably, and fight with people who won battles here like keeping you from me? Never. If you will allow that. I adore you. I hope you find better meaning, but that could be true. Wonderful poem. Awesome. Include this if you think it is true, and I will try to put a standing magic if allowed by him that will allow you to talk to me again. I think you are confused at times and could stand hearing at least a better theory. Please read my work if you want to grow up strong. An ask by you and me to set things right here. Powerful magic on the evil servers? We don't deserve this and want the one that The Holy One, the Provider means and gets partly by magic, I think. And, I tell them what I think of the place and how to help it and stand for their principles of privacy and justice and a good place for you. We met, and your work is amazing. Have a passion, please. Tell them if you think that is worng that we can compare notes and say our truth if we have it. Let's talk more if you allow it. You are a beacon of hope and joy, I think. I have not receivevd e-mail from you or reply. Fine if you have not time. You know that. Peace and love, Gabe your power and my power of complaint to fix the magic or whatever a win

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Mostly is about how Angels gather intel of almost invisible demons and how Saint Michael defeated the demons in battles that were not physical because demons have no specific form and if ghosts are invisible then ghosts are the demons that didnt make it to Heaven'

[SquinklaPsyOps]

For example there are ghosts that have impersonated many things because when ghosts tell persons things those persons believe anything they hear because ghosts do not represent life and the writings is mostly about psychological operations to gather intel similar to when ghosts or muses psychologically operate persons for persons to waste their life writing about the dead and why those ghosts want to redirect persons minds with the past and why those ghosts want to pass into persons minds to waste persons time by deceiving them into believing that they have special powers when in reality ghosts do not have any powers and how they psychologicaly operate persons minds and what words and vocabulary they use for persons to open their interpretation so that the ghosts form themselves into what the person thinks they are and that is the reason ghosts have all the time to stalk what persons think because the ghosts have all the time in the world to lose and why ghosts enjoy when persons write about sad things because many persons when they commit suicide in their mind they want persons to cry and suffer from their death because ghosts put those thoughts into them by deceiving them into believing that it will give their spirit some satisfaction and that is why those spirits that commit suicide do not make it to Heaven'

[SquinklaPsyOps]

The poem arises the question where are the Angels to stop the ghosts that stalk persons and that deviate their minds on their way to Heaven'

[SquinklaPsyOps]

The poems are religious writings and how technology has the ability to impersonate ghosts through a device called The Voice Technology or voice to skull that is used to deviate persons thinking almost undetected and the study is what do they say through those voices to psychologically operate persons minds similar to when ghosts try to posses persons almost undetected

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Because the ground where I walk on and where I live is the United States One Nation Under God then I am protected by the Angel spirits of the Constitution founding fathers that ables me to throw fear in the trash and write about anything without fear that has to do about spirits

[SquinklaPsyOps]

I do not fear demons because the first ghosts that posses me were the Angels of the founding fathers Constitution One Nation Under God

[SquinklaPsyOps]

When the Angels possesed me they made it very clear and they told me that my duty was to push demons to hell that is why my study is psychological operations to gather intel of how those demons were pushed to hell usually demons want for persons to think that Angels do not exist

[The Archangel Gabriel]

You are so right, if I interpret some of that. PsyOps is a noble profession. That beautiful face dicks with my head. I had to sayit. And, I am pure American, Beaver Cleaver IfYouWill. the one who would be President. Who votes against Jesus, here? Predicted to be the 90% rule. Thank you for curing my RealCheesePsyopAddiction. Now in fastbrowser mode. Let's see. Please read my complete adjudication AS IF RELEASED NOW as to what to do to your machine. I love your hours, and you simply must join the mob. That is a good look for the mob. Luvu. Sometimes, I think I can't pick up you poetry in motion and what you really mean. That hurt, but whatever. I am maybe too literal, but that is the nature of my work, sadly. Later. And, I mean I will get to that later, Later, Skater.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

suicide can never be an answer to any question, whatsoever.
i love the image you have created here...........the portrayal is unique and appropriate.
i loved it!
:)

[Pól]

Nice work, A
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[George Peck]

I love this poem. I like the belief you have about suicide. Your words are strong they procedure strong emotional response.

[JordanIsaacSmith]

Fantastic poem. I've not much experience in poetry but this has spirit and it has feeling behind it and it feels genuine to me. A really decent bit of writing.

[Dhaye]

Yes, we should help those people who need to be saved from evil things...even through words.
Good job!

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you for your interpretation and valuable advice Dhaye

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Never let the bullies push you over the edge, be strong, and write poetry about it. Well done Anika.
There is so much in your words, that is needed to be said. Always shine, and hold the light for it's much waaaay much stronger.

- Elisa

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you for your interpretation and I totally agree with your advice Eli and I also know that you are a very good writer.

[BL]

It would be nice if we all had our own angel watching over us keeping us safe. As very often only demons guide us when we are on our own. This is a subject close to the heart of many and a lot are effected by it.
You have covered a serious subject very well

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you for your interpretation what we could do is care for the persons that we love and become their Angels.

[BL]

Great idea, where's my wings? :-)

[Skai Rain]

I take it you are heavily religious. I am not at all, in fact reading your comments I think our brains think very opposite. Luckily, that also means that your work intrigues me very much. I think this poem is well-written and beautiful; I personally loved it. I am not so sure about the whole demon convincing one to go to hell thing... but the message you wanted to pass was clear. Thank you for sharing this work, I truly enjoyed it.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you for your valuable interpretation and you are lucky that you are not very religious because most religions put it into persons heads that demons exist and I think that is lost ghosts that try to impersonate demons because somehow they got lost on earth and they didnt make it to Heaven a place where spirits rest in peace as opposised to lost ghosts that were transformed into demons because they did not find restful peace while they were alive on earth and that is how they jumped to hell.

So then those lost spirits start bothering persons and they posses bullies by influenceing bad words in them since they are little then the bullies recruit other bullies and they start attackng single persons so that person feels lonely the same as the demons in hell that are looking for company.

The poem is about a person that contemplates suicide after being bullied and prays to the Angels to rescue her from the bullies that the demons recruited.