The Arch Angel

The Arch Angel

She is crying again

The girl sits through the night

Tears stream down her beautiful puffy face

How much can she take?

She might grasp grip

She looks at her face in the mirror and

Sees an ugly with no body

A spirit who might try to posses her

She is pushed near the edge

And starts screaming for help

And prays to Arch Angel

"Where once I saw a cliff

Descending down I wanted

Single I was

With no one helping

The rising hand from below

Is offering to start pulling

HELP ME BEFORE I JUMP"

Author's Note

In life words are important when persons commit suicide they go to hell because it was the demons voices that convinced them to join them.

Reviews

[ms. barrie]

profound, and very disturbing...the ending is very haunting as it speaks truths.
those closest to you or seem that way are the ones that hurt you the most.
the old saying "you only hurt the ones you love" -- of course i could be off the
mark...as usual. i enjoyed descriptive imagery you conveyed in the character as well.

a haunting, yet enjoyable read that needed to be shared & and very well written...
brilliant job! :)

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you Dear Barrie for your valuable review and am glad you liked the poem.

[ms. barrie]

You're very welcome, Dear Squinkla - I've always enjoyed your
Intriguing perception in your writes. Happy writings :)))

[DoormanDan]

This is a very powerful and well written piece of writing. It flows wonderfully, and the picture in it is awesome and really adds to the poem a ton. All in all, this poem is fantastic. Keep up the good work! :)

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you for your valuable review and am glad you liked the poem Dear writer.

[An owl on the moon]

There is so much painful emotion flowing here... taking one to the edge... to the gap between life and death... seeking a hand to pull her back to safety... to life... so powerful...

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you for your valuable review Dear writer

[Great Aunt Astri]

Ah, this is a sad and heartfelt poem. Who knows what is on the other side. Even if we are pulled into 'Hell' maybe we pass through to better things. Good for you writing this poem.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you for your interpretation it seems that when persons say that hell is on earth signifies that those are the ghosts that are lost on earth and what they try to do is they try to posses persons to join them such as when persons commit suicide then those persons do not make it to Heaven'

[Mizo4]

nice write. interesting notions and imagry. :)

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank You Marion for your review I really like it :)

[A.J.]

I like it, as someone who has written about similar things. it reads a bit chaotic, but sometimes it is supposed to. still, I'd put a comma after grasp. also.. unless you are further trying to reiterate chaos, to call your character both beautiful and ugly in two stanzas... one or the other would have to go, if it were me. and considering the subject, I think we know the answer to that. keep writing!

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you for your interpretation, when she "Sees an ugly with no body" she sees a demon ghost that is trying to posses her to commit suicide, you know how demons try to destroy beautiful and that is the reason they are not allowed in Heaven.

[A.J.]

very nice.

[E.A. Rubin]

While philosophically, I disagree with your ideas, I think your words are poetic, beautiful and like a dream. I am an atheist, and I also have a sister who committed suicide 27 years ago. I don't believe in a god, in a devil, in a physical heaven, or a physical hell. I believe someone commits suicide due to depression, mental illness, addiction, or some other form of desperation. However, it interests me to read thoughts that differ from my own. Keep writing!

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you for your interpretation, Is freedom of religion and your opinion is important, maybe Heaven is being alive and having a physical body which gives persons free will to do what they want.

[TL Boehm]

reading this after the loss of Robin Williams...
Who knows what goes on in the mind of a person. I want to believe that perhaps - the person is given one more second to reconcile with God - but that is beyond me.
I do think that some people are demonically led to take their own lives. I think others just give up. Once we clearly exercise our free will to walk away...
Hell - hell is that separation I don't want to know.
Very interesting topic for a poem.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you for your interpretation the question can be what psychological operation did the ghost that possesed Robin used to convince him to take that road

Since ghosts can penetrate through walls then they could had easily penetrated through his body behind his knowledge then mimic his body movements inside his body until little by little until he was tired and that was what the ghosts were waiting for and then the ghosts started imagining things that Robin saw and that is how they convinced him behind his knowledge and he was not awared of ghosts interference that predimitated to take Robin to the other side behind his knowledge

That case can be taken to justice in Heaven and it could be viewed as that the ghosts fabricated actions inside Robin mind and that is what happened

The question can be how long were those ghosts stalking Robin and what intel did those criminal lost ghosts gathered from reading Robin mind behind his knowledge that they used to manipulate Robin to frame him with suicide

Those ghosts that deceived Robin were probably the same ghosts that were waiting for Robin to cross and then they probably told him that they knew everything about him and that is how they probably deceived him to follow them somewhere and that is how they deviated Robin from Heaven'

[Sami Khalil]

"Single I was
With no one helping
The rising hand from below
Is offering to start pulling"

Some people are pushed to the edge of insanity or extreme suffering when they commit suicide. Only God knows what they have went through within. It is heartbreaking indeed to all those affected...A powerful write....:)....................

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Love the poem, I love the idea of it too.

Kaze~ :-)