Paper Monster

Paper Monster

I believe in the ghosts from this strange place and

In the stupidities that make you laugh

I believe in everything you write about

The closer I enter your world

I feel fragile

Running after your beasts

Pick up your pen and fight

Author's Note

Paper Monster

Reviews

[absmith]

This is beautiful, it's so simple but has such a complex meaning

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you for your review, I do appreciate it.

[A. Amos]

This is interesting and mesmerizing piece, simply beautiful

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you, I appreciate your review.

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Wow I simply love it Well Done BRAVO!!



Thank you for sharing this very POWERFUL piece.


I loved this line of stanza's here.



Pick up your pen and fight



Blessings. kindred poet

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you for your review and thank you for liking the stanza, it is about not to keep anything inside, and to let out what is inside in this network of writers that share the same interest and goals.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

you're very welcome. it's my pleasure always. blessings. kindred poet

[NoelEdgail]

Very thought provoking and inspiring. Thank you for sharing :)

[SquinklaPsyOps]

I appreciate your review, is about to keep trying, and now maybe I think that is not such a good idea.

[NoelEdgail]

Wait, why is it not such a good idea?

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Because we are not God, we cant fix the course of life, persons do die and that cant be stopped and that affects feelings and the happiness of life.

[NoelEdgail]

So what you're saying is that life is determined to end in misery due to death? Thus, we should not try?

[SquinklaPsyOps]

I really dont know what to tell you, I am really confused at this moment because some ghosts started bothering and I think they should go bother their own families, because when I asked them who they were they had no relationship to my family.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

I really wish that ghosts would never come back from their deaths to bother the living and I think that God should stop them because when you try to tell persons about it they just laugh and there is a documentary about cases that have happened called "haunted" that proves they do bother persons and then there is nobody on earth to defend the persons lifes that are affected.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

I used to be very happy until those ghosts started bothering, my opinion is that if they want to go to Heaven they should ask their own families and not me because I dont even them.

[NoelEdgail]

Have you ever asked them the reasons with why they haunt you?

[SquinklaPsyOps]

The first time they approached me they said that I was an Angel and that they wanted me to take them to Heaven, then I told them to go to Hell because I didnt know who they were and that I had a life to live and that they had already lived their life and they were not my responsability because I didnt know them.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Because Angels descend to earth from Heaven to pick up other Angels and Angels on earth do not carry demons to Heaven.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

They said they wanted to go to Heaven to see what it was about and then they wanted to come back to earth and that is when I knew that their intentions were that they wanted to invade Heaven just for fun and that is when I started cursing those ghosts to hell.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Then they didnt like it because they were spotted and that is when I knew they were mad because they couldnt deceive me.

[Sami Khalil]

"I feel fragile
Running after your beasts

Pick up your pen and fight"

The pen is indeed mightier than the sword, than the beasts of the past and the laughter of some critics on our work. Things that haunt us can dissipate with proper approaches. A splendid poem...:).....................

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you for your interpretation Sami and for your advice that is valuable for continuation of future poetry writings.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly...:)....................

[daisy]

Wow. That's like, so thoughtful and what you could have said in a long, complicated metaphor, you had really crafted your words right and in result, you got a beautiful poem. I don't believe that it should have been longer, its perfect the way it is. Its nice to see this topic from your point of view but I'm not sure wether it might have been better just with 'you' or just with 'i'. Because it makes it sound a little more personal, like love letters, in how you've written it. But that's just my interpretation of it! All in all, really captivating :)

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you for your valuable interpretation, what was trying to say about when I read the authors poems was something similar to what jacob erin-cilberto said "i do think we write poetry to chase those beasts of past...and the ghosts of ex loves that haunt us..." said, that do appreciate reading how the writers in the network defend themselves by letting it all out through pen and paper for readers to aid in solving and providing intellectual interpretations to their concerns and inspirations.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i do think we write poetry to chase those beasts of past...and the ghosts of ex loves that haunt us...

and with a touch of humor, our pen is capable of fighting back but also creating words with which we laugh at ourselves at the same time.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Wow, your interpretation is precise and true, I really like the way you described it "i do think we write poetry to chase those beasts of past...and the ghosts of ex loves that haunt us..." Thank you jacob erin-cilberto.

[Everett DeValle]

Short, concise, and profound...I love the analogy and metaphor used...it's always better to use brain than brawn...work smarter not harder...but always play at your level...poetry, at least to me, is not a competition. Thank you for the read request. I very much enjoyed the read.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you for your valuable review, and interpretation about competition. What was trying to say is whether is fantasy or truth what writers write about, it is always good manners to try to give them their writing the respect they deserve for their valuable time and dedication.

[Everett DeValle]

Well, YOU definitely deserve Respect, Squinkla...you invoked strong emotions in your verse...and I love that...I love that I can feel your emotions with you. Thank you for sharing.

[J.P. Bristow]

I don't normally give feedback on solicited reads......normally some kind of interaction is well the norm or a friend suggests a cool read but in this case I digress. A fun exploration of how one can lose themselves in others...work that takes us somewhere anywhere is normally deemed good ...emoting is considered very good and in other scenarios the depth of despair can cause us share in its bleakness but to write a new ending to some of the dark tales to rally for the soul and fight is indeed worth the cost of ink and price of admission.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you, I appreciate your valuable interpretation, it is motivating and do appreciate your interest in leading me in the right direction.