I love this!! It is like when your struggling to keep writing but your mind is refusing to let your get a rhythm but you continue to fight on! A very good piece :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Hi Dear Writer Thank You for your review I know it took a little while to write and respond to your .. read moreHi Dear Writer Thank You for your review I know it took a little while to write and respond to your interpretation and the reason being is my puppy passed away and couldnt concentrate and now am here and look forward to reading your writings.
Those monsters can slow us down. We need to keep writing and thinking. Defeat them and create. Nice use of thoughts and I like the strong ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thank You For Your Interpretation Coyote Poetry the response at this time was my puppy passed away a.. read moreThank You For Your Interpretation Coyote Poetry the response at this time was my puppy passed away and was making sure he is in Heaven and I couldnt concentrate and now I am here and look forward to reading your writings.
words are cruel and can work in the same manner as monsters to destroy the world...but pen is something that we should not use to fight...we can motivate people to take steps..so we should be careful..your words guide me to ensure i choose my words correctly..thanks for sharing it:)
Raj
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thank You For your valuable interpretation and what I was trying to say here "Pick up your pen and f.. read moreThank You For your valuable interpretation and what I was trying to say here "Pick up your pen and fight" was to use this network to solve or gather different scenario opinions to what might be going on at the time'
I love this because it allows the reader to take it in in their own way, great job!
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Hi Dear Writer Thank You for your review I know it took a little while to write and respond to your .. read moreHi Dear Writer Thank You for your review I know it took a little while to write and respond to your interpretation and the reason being is my puppy passed away and couldnt concentrate and now am here and look forward to reading your writings.
10 Years Ago
I'm sorry to hear that... but I'm glad your back on and ready to keep going :)
Your images are very engaging... I think we all have out paper monsters, both the ones we must battle and the ones we must enlist to help us fight. Some of the best little monsters unfold themselves from our past and can fight now as bravely as they once did, or, at least give us the inspiration to do so. They are a hard act to follow, but as you say, we must pick us our pens and fight... This is a short piece that packs a large punch. Well done!
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thank you for your valuable and educated interpretation, I also appreciate your compliment and encou.. read moreThank you for your valuable and educated interpretation, I also appreciate your compliment and encouragement, Thank you again.
We can be anything, see anything on paper (or on screen).
Here, I am at my best and my strongest, brave and fearful.
You can't touch me here, I'll kill you with a Poem little monster.
Thank you, appreciate your review in a world where persons are lured to write about darkness, which .. read moreThank you, appreciate your review in a world where persons are lured to write about darkness, which makes me wonder what causes it, hopefully this will enlighten them.
Writer Of The TwentyFirstCentury, confiscated the PsyOps script from the corrupt military radio host that was remotely assaulting me inside the city, which I plan to publish parts of it here, to study.. more..