Arch Formation

My Way

I kneel on my balcony and I pray

As the stars shine on my face

I see myself in a distant future

Where everything is possible

Arch formation

One step at a time

Im alive

Author's Note

Arch Formation

Reviews

[Jamestown]

Amen!!! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[TL Boehm]

a future where everything is possible - both terrifying and exciting prospect.

[Carl Drake Barnard]

No words but Awesome :) Thanks for sharing :)

[Tree]

I like how this made me feel. There was a confidence is this proclamation that makes one Want to believe, to be a part of. Also, the construction (format) of this poem, whether accidental or not falls in line with the ancient "tip of the spear" war formation, where the apex of the main thrust pierces the enemies formation like a spear, wherein the rest of the warriors then merge –––– into the wounded enemy.
I enjoy your work Squink. It causes me to wonder in a spiritual way.

Diego

[ORIT]

this definitely speaks of the hope that we must endure to have...a lot said...very much enjoyed it!

[fireblossom]

That describes us well. What are we if not reporters of the mental, emotional and spiritual experience. This piece is very big in concept. I felt timeless reading it. Like standing on a high solitary place with the stars pressing and eternity close by. I really do feel your life. Thank you.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you for your valuable interpretation, I like the part where you describe us writers "What are we if not reporters of the mental, emotional and spiritual experience." And do appreciate your motivating imagery descriptions.

[Tech]

Simple yet empowering, amazing to see you can put so much meaning in such a short poem.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you for your review, I now realize that I dont know everything and that trying to know everyhing maybe is a waste of time because persons still die and I dont know how to deal with that and maybe thats the part that evil is waiting to try to take advantage because if I dont know where I am going maybe they will not be interested to know where I am trying to go to.

[Tech]

To an extent that is what life is all about, trying to learn as much as you can before you no longer exist to try to learn anymore. But the most important thing is trying to grow and become a better person, I feel that will lead you to the place you are looking for that you speak of.

[Rob Santana]

Strong, confident and powerful words you've penned. Good job.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you for your review.

[kayBiE]

I like" I see myself in a distant future" it makes one wonder

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you for your interpretation, maybe as an Angel is not recommended to see that because evil is always stalking to try to interfere.

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful artwork and positive words. I like it. Thank you for sharing the positive poem and your thoughts.
Coyote

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you for your review, I wrote the poem as a message to Arch Angels telling them that as long as we humans are alive in physical form we are blessed by God.

[Coyote Poetry]

He did. We need to listen. Always a pleasure to read your work.