Beginning

Beginning

I thought we were going to be together forever

Because of us being from the magic world when

All the signs said that we were always going to be together

Now you look at me, and I don't want to be with you anymore

Because you didn't believe me

When I told you, and I was being completely sincere

Now when you try to approach me

I dont want to be with you

I learned all that by myself, without you

With no one to talk to when your

Farewell took the happiest days of my life

Leaving me sad, with a cold soul in solitude

I don't want to remember

How many days I cried

With the only ones to listen

Were the ghosts from the other world

Telling me to be quiet

Because I was waking them up

Don't get near me

I don't want to remember that

I don;t want to be friends with your friends that are going to hell

Don't look at me, I don't want to know you

Author's Note

Inspired by
"She kissed me once and once only" by Coyote Poetry
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Castellenas/1290370/

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful poem of regret. Hard to grasp when someone isn't believing what we believe. I wanted to read more. You left the reader with question and the desire to know more. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[SquinklaPsyOps]

I normally don't use this style of writing because of not wanting to put my guard down, but after I read your poem "She kissed me once and once only" by Coyote Poetry, I was truly impressed and inspired and saw that it was possible while still being protected.

Thank you, your work is amazing, I've read several of them from years back and truly also admire your interpretations of fellow writers.

Thank you again for opening that door.

Sincere Gratitude

Anika

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Great separation skills in this write Anika... you never dissapoint.....


there is always a certain pain through your stuff, of hell... Sis... I like it, because it's tells us there is love through pain. Regret is a b***h. But yet then, a beautiful b***h we can learn from.....
She always watches us, through the vally, of hurt, and grins.... that's how she is.

But to beat the battle is to make art..... like you fight the worse, with immortal heart.

- Sis. x

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Is something similar to when a witch finds a wizard and they are compatible because they share something in common and then when they separate because the wizard would rather use skills to try to take advantage of persons that do not have those skills, and then the witch is alone and knows that her choices are limited because she cant share her secret with regular persons so then her choices in finding the other half are limited because her first duty is to protect the Magic World

[Paul Seaman]

so your planning a reconcillation with this person ??? No, actually what I really liked was you left the stanza open at the end of many of the sentences. Kept me reading. I think you can love a friend, and frend an exlover, but egad,, most times not !

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you for your interpretation, when I read it, it brings back memories of what I was going through and after I wrote it, I never crossed paths with that person again and I don't have those feelings towards that person anymore, now Im happy.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Indeed this is truly well written.When we have been hurt by those we love it is really devastating.Well done:)

[SquinklaPsyOps]

It was horrible during that time, now Ive learned how to handle it.

[Vidya Bacchus]

I am glad that you are fine now :)

[Valeriya Nahirnyak]

"I thought we were going to be together forever.", while I was a teen , my 12-15 years old you have no idea how many boys made me think like that and then as you say in you're poem, they're gone.
It's the first poem I read on this network. Congratulations, it's really profound!

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you for your interpretation, when I read it, it brings back memories of what I was going through and after I wrote it, I never crossed paths with that person again and I don't have those feelings towards that person anymore, now Im happy.

[Khushi]

It conveys a lot of emotion. Love n hatred are good enough alone.. In this poem both of them are together..

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Is about when we have strong reason to let go of a person that when we ran into them, their presence becomes insignificant and when they notice that, they start to try to get our attention again.

[Carolann Dowsett]

Beautiful, soaked in pain and full of regret

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you, is about when we walk out of a relationship because we realize we don't want to be friends with their circle of friends because they have different thoughts

[sonnie ibadah]

i sense sorrow and dissapointment from not being loved as much as you loved. i sense resentment and yet fear of falling for that person once more. it's a very emotional piece thought i don't think that title suits it. anyways, nice work!

[SquinklaPsyOps]

What I was trying to say is that sometimes in relationships we could be forced to be friends with their friends just to please them,

and when we realize that we don't want to be friends with their friends the relationship doesn't work

then the beginning could be trying to make them understand that they are not going to change our mind even if it hurted

[sonnie ibadah]

well, nice. thanx for sharing.

[Geoffrey Spriggott]

Liked it a lot. Very powerful and a good title. Could refer to the beginning of a relationship and contrast that with the rest of the poem, or could mean a fresh start after leaving someone. Keep Writing!

[SquinklaPsyOps]

What I was trying to say is that sometimes in relationships we could be forced to be friends with their friends just to please them,

and when we realize that we don't want to be friends with their friends the relationship doesn't work

then the beginning could be trying to make them understand that they are not going to change our mind even if it hurted

[Geoffrey Spriggott]

Ah yes, I the meaning clearly in the last 2 lines now. I've seen this happen before and it's always sad, but necessary. You can't be with someone if you hate their friends, and their friends hate you. Well written!

[Sami Khalil]

"Farewell took the happiest days of my life

Leaving me sad, with a cold soul in solitude




I don't want to remember

How many days I cried"

Farewells are hard leaving us in pain and solitudes...A sad and emotive write...:)................

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Maybe I need to rewrite it, what I was trying to say is that sometimes in relationships we could be forced to be friends with their friends just to please them,

and when we realize that we don't want to be friends with their friends the relationship doesn't work

[Sami Khalil]

Good as is...You are welcome...:)...............