Enchanted

Enchanted

A Poem by SquinklaPsyOps
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En Cantar

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White unicorns cross and jump non-stop 
Towards the narrower side of the street
If you look at the sign you will see
A fairy princess working in a blue dress
It seems that she only rises
When the elves cross
Towards the castle at the end of the street
Right there where the heat is
Imagine mermaids on the moon
With Sparks painting the stars
And dancing princesses with scented dresses flying
In a blue coach
The dragon of the castle is sad and in a very bad mood
Is his crazed fire which feels warm
And the witch neighbor might seek a remedy
Because the fire does not cool down
Could spend her life with that giant
That everybody fears
And if I go touch her magic wand
She says she is only human.

© 2013 SquinklaPsyOps


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Thank you Maria, Rene, Kika, Andre, Daniela and Sergio for saving my life

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This has such a wonderful feel of fantasy. You brought forward so many different images, so many different aspects of a fantasy world. Great to read.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I found a celtic coin yesterday

there is a reason for everything, no matter how unpleasant it can seem

thank you for sending me this; I cannot say I understand as well as I should, but, once again
thank you

Posted 11 Years Ago


O! this is wonderful. in its prose format. The language convey the thought. Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


a beautifully written poem. I liked it!! very descriptive. very pretty. flows well together. no errors. very enjoyable to read. again overall, very beautiful poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


only human but remarkably incredible.love it.great fantasy write

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lovely whimsical piece...nicely penned...Rose

Posted 11 Years Ago


its alright, I like it, the words are nice, just seems incomplete.. like one of the other comments said sounds like it could be the start to something else, but as a complete poem itself im not so sure, but it is nice, thanks for sharing it with me

Posted 11 Years Ago


This feels like it could easily be the beginning of a fantasy story. Nice!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wow, what a gorgeous, mystical yet very profound poem.
Absolutely love the imagery you depicted in this write,
Especially the third stanza. This is an amazing write!
Thanks for sharing.:) - 100 - 100

Posted 11 Years Ago


Mysterious, magical...a mythical feel.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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