Enchanted

En Cantar

White unicorns cross and jump non-stop 

Towards the narrower side of the street

If you look at the sign you will see

A fairy princess working in a blue dress

It seems that she only rises

When the elves cross

Towards the castle at the end of the street

Right there where the heat is

Imagine mermaids on the moon

With Sparks painting the stars

And dancing princesses with scented dresses flying

In a blue coach

The dragon of the castle is sad and in a very bad mood

Is his crazed fire which feels warm

And the witch neighbor might seek a remedy

Because the fire does not cool down

Could spend her life with that giant

That everybody fears

And if I go touch her magic wand

She says she is only human.

Author's Note

Tribute

Thank you Maria, Rene, Kika, Andre, Daniela and Sergio for saving my life

Reviews

[Dhaye]

A magical tale. How I wish I could make something which the characters would be remembered by the children...

Great! I'm enthralled. Keep writing, Anika.

[wordwarrior]

Oh how wonderful! I adore this poem and the strength it evokes. You are right, there is really nothing to fear except ourselves. We are all human!
Clever writing indeed. Into my favourites!

[Dye]

I admit, I am not good a deciphering poetry so I was a little lost as it went over my head LOL But I do love some of the lines that you use quite a bit "mermaid on the moon", it's a magical image.

[Shane Mohamed]

I love it. It's very simple, yet the imagery is very powerful and evocative. One of your best works by far. Great job.

[Skyangel_91]

Absolutely wonderful. It's very magical. No other words to describe it. Love it!

[J Todd Underhill]

I am not sure why you sent me the link, but talk about synchronycity I was working on some similar lines this morning and the feel resembled what I was kicking around enough to make my world stop for a moment and for my mind to trip out for a bit! Well done you should call and share this piece tonight on our show www.kzkoradio.com

[Wingless Fallen Angel]

This is so amazing and mystical! I love it! Fantastical! Beautiful imagery 100/100

[Cody Williams]

Very majestic piece! Thanks for sharing!

-CW

[Yiling He]

Really beautiful poem, sparking a lot of imagination in my mind while reading out loud. Thank you for sharing.

[Lowesy]

Might I recommend adding punctuation to it to add emphasis in certain areas. Otherwise, good descriptions, nice images of folk tales.