Enchanted

En Cantar

White unicorns cross and jump non-stop 

Towards the narrower side of the street

If you look at the sign you will see

A fairy princess working in a blue dress

It seems that she only rises

When the elves cross

Towards the castle at the end of the street

Right there where the heat is

Imagine mermaids on the moon

With Sparks painting the stars

And dancing princesses with scented dresses flying

In a blue coach

The dragon of the castle is sad and in a very bad mood

Is his crazed fire which feels warm

And the witch neighbor might seek a remedy

Because the fire does not cool down

Could spend her life with that giant

That everybody fears

And if I go touch her magic wand

She says she is only human.

Author's Note

Tribute

Thank you Maria, Rene, Kika, Andre, Daniela and Sergio for saving my life

Reviews

[Tom]

An imaginative fairytale, Hans Christian Anderson himself would have enjoyed this magical story!

[ChikHaley64]

Beautifully written! I love how it sounds when I read it out loud. Seriously, I love it. :)

[Phantom Heart]

I like your play of words in the fantasy. It had a charming feeling to it. I love that if you try to touch her magic wand she says she is only human. :)

[Rosaria_V]

So beautiful!!!! I honestly love this and the title fit perfectly

[KAin]

Simple but beautiful... there's a child-like, starry-eyed wonder to this poem, transforming the mundane into the extraordinary.
Good work!

[ferousfinite]

There is definately a lot going on here. I like the fantasy feel and the playful nature.

[Lydia Shutter]

Magical images dance through this write. Often the things we fear most are reflections of our souls. I liked this a lot. Lydi**

[Richie]

I love the imagery in this poem, it truly got my imagination going :)

[Traci]

A beautiful tale, full of magical imagery. Definitely one of my favorites.

[taniya maria]

Its is really a beautiful work.. transports to a magical world... great work..