Enchanted

En Cantar

White unicorns cross and jump non-stop 

Towards the narrower side of the street

If you look at the sign you will see

A fairy princess working in a blue dress

It seems that she only rises

When the elves cross

Towards the castle at the end of the street

Right there where the heat is

Imagine mermaids on the moon

With Sparks painting the stars

And dancing princesses with scented dresses flying

In a blue coach

The dragon of the castle is sad and in a very bad mood

Is his crazed fire which feels warm

And the witch neighbor might seek a remedy

Because the fire does not cool down

Could spend her life with that giant

That everybody fears

And if I go touch her magic wand

She says she is only human.

Author's Note

Tribute

Thank you Maria, Rene, Kika, Andre, Daniela and Sergio for saving my life

Reviews

[Everett DeValle]

A very nice tribute...very enchanting write that stirs one's soul...Nicely done.

[Sami Khalil]

This was magical and very imaginative. You are talented...:)

[Aethereal]

Very few are aware of that magical world that lies within the fabric of ordinary things such as street crossings, hedge rows, or a bed of flowers. Castles, unicorns, dragons, and fairies are everywhere for those who believe. But what we see may not be touched lest it vanish into the aether like a frightened butterfly.

[OTownPete]

There is quite the flight of fancy feel to this write and it had my mind's eye working overtime picturing all of these denizens. Thanks for sharing. Your friend in words, Pete

[Richard]

you are full of imagination flames :) this was just great

[gabrielle]

Oh, what an exquisite magical world you painted through your ink. Keep this kind of imagination and it could land you to places you did not even expect. Very creative.

[Ohhhwillow]

"Imagine mermaids on the moon with sparks painting the stars", this really struck me! I am a sucker for fantasy, and you really fed my appetite for it here, with other worldly images that flew throughout my head. Thank you for posting! One thing I would say is your style and theme here would definitely go well with some gentle alliteration, I think. :)

[Emrick]

Thumbs up. Nice creativity!

[Veronica]

I enjoyed the whimsey of it. Very nice.

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Interesting fairy tale...not your usual "Disney" stuff, which I quite liked. I really enjoyed the ending; where by touching the magic wand, the fairy tale actual disappears. I enjoyed this one.