Enchanted

En Cantar

White unicorns cross and jump non-stop 

Towards the narrower side of the street

If you look at the sign you will see

A fairy princess working in a blue dress

It seems that she only rises

When the elves cross

Towards the castle at the end of the street

Right there where the heat is

Imagine mermaids on the moon

With Sparks painting the stars

And dancing princesses with scented dresses flying

In a blue coach

The dragon of the castle is sad and in a very bad mood

Is his crazed fire which feels warm

And the witch neighbor might seek a remedy

Because the fire does not cool down

Could spend her life with that giant

That everybody fears

And if I go touch her magic wand

She says she is only human.

Author's Note

Tribute

Thank you Maria, Rene, Kika, Andre, Daniela and Sergio for saving my life

Reviews

[Tumara Hall]

How beautiul! Such an artistic piece

[Robert Tusitala O'Neill]

Wow, okay, beautiful photo for a beautiful poem! Imagine mermaids on the moon...What a wonderful line! Mermaids of Mare Tranquillitatis. Where does this stuff come from, you speak of? I think it could be a very great thing if you secretly are speaking of the sky, but with mythological and fantasy characters.

[Twizzler]

This is cute. I like the fairy tale theme....reminds me of when I was little. Good job!

[Ross Newport]

This feels a bit Dada to me, only more coherent. I'm not sure about this section

"The dragon of the castle is sad and in a very bad mood
Is his crazed fire which feels warm
And the witch neighbor might seek a remedy
Because the fire does not cool down"

it doesn't flow as well as the rest, other than that I like the imagery it you've put my head :)

[Amduscia]

Always been a great fan of Fairy Tales. Very well written.

[Bluefire]

"Imagine mermaids on the moon
With Sparks painting the stars..."

"Could spend her life with that giant
That everybody fears
And if I go touch her magic wand
She says she is only human."

I like the dream/painting like imagery of this poem. I also like the story it tells and the story that I believe this piece is hiding.
While reading it, I got the odd feeling at some parts that they were metaphors.
Well, great job! ^^

[RainDancer1997]

Wow, I'm glad I read this:-) ! Its such a beautiful fantasy poem:-)

"Imagine mermaids on the moon"

That sounds so cute to me! Great job chica:-)

[Shreya]

I loved it. This is one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read.

[Jordan Bryant]

Fantasy poetry is rarer than I would like it to be, so I was very excited to read this. It's got some lovely imagery and it just sparkled with magic. Great job!

[MandaBear]

This reminds me of Alice in Wonderland. So playful and crazy love it! Great job!