Blue Forest Girl

Safe Inside the City Limits



Outside America’s city limits,
The Red Forest Gays lie in wait,
Outside America City’s city limits,
These PsyOps Gays for their scout wait,
He returns from an obscure hole,

“The Password?” Query the Red Forest PsyOps Gays.

“I’m happy,” says the scout returning from the hole.

“We're happy,” chorus all the Red Forest Gays.

“Did you see the girl?” PsyOp Cyclops, King of Red Forest Gays says.

“I saw the girl.”

“The Blue Forest Girl?”

“The Blue Forest Girl,” the PsyOps scout from Red Forest states.

“Tell me of her dreams, her thoughts.”

“She hates old people for their pessimism. She feels animals should not sleep in snow. She imagines the legions of Hell’s demons being defeated by American soldiers’ souls.”

“Did she download them?”

“She shouts victory cries over their graves.”

“Are you writing on her body?”

“I’m drawing on her bones, the instructions for her soul,”

PsyOp Cyclops’s gay cackle crackles through icicles in Red Forest trees.
“Does she know she works for me?”

“She knows and knows how to make those inside the city limits’ belief in us cease to be.”

“In we?”

“In we.”

“Using I.T.?”

“She will use I.T…She’ll write of us on poetry sites. All who hear her will think her impolite, and believe that all aligned against PsyOps must be aligned with Al Jazeera, aligned against gays and military careers”

“You wrote it on her bones?”

“I drew it in her soul through an obscure hole that travels into city limit homes.”

Author's Note

JP

Reviews

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Interesting... I'm not exactly sure how to take this one, but that is not to say that I didn't like the direction. I think this is one of those pieces that I will be thinking about for a while, attempting to figure out the little nuances between the lines that are just outside of my reach at the moment. I will have to read more of you to become familliar with your voice and concept choices. This one definitely has a certain "singular human being" over "the man" feel to it... I'm intrigued.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Something like fight club game girl.

[ron]

Not sure how to take this one. I served for 20 years and I never sign my souls to the devil. You may want to rethink this if you seriously belive that. It was an interesting peice. But once again I dont know of any one that sign their souls to the devil. In fact we pledge to God and Country.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

"In fact we pledge to God and Country." that's freedom of the press propaganda.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

God created Adam and Eve, and the black military commander in chief stained the city of angels state California when he approved gay marriages.

[ron]

Like I said I served for 20 years and that is no freedom of the press propaganda. Im not upset with you so if I sound like I am than I appologize.

[ron]

I hope that you are not upset with me.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

On the contrary, Ron. I am very impressed how you handled it. Thank you. I just been researching illustrations for a comic book story board that is what's been going on, I should be done shortly to read your work and to try to give you valuable feedback that could help you as a writer.

[ron]

Thank you. If your busy no need to rush. I was just afraid you were upset with me...well I am very happy I did not hurt your feelings or offend you in any way. Good look with your comic book story board.

[Ankur Sharma]

“Are you writing on her body?”

“I’m drawing on her bones, the instructions for her soul,”
wow all i can say it is out of the world.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

They are illustrations instructions drawn on soldiers bones by spirits for when they die the guards at the bottom take the soldiers souls to hell because when people join the military they sign their souls to the devil, that is why soldiers don't manifest after they die because their souls burn in hell for eternity.

If you know somebody that works in the cemetery tell to open a grave of a dead soldier and with your digital camera use a macro lense and take photos of their bones and you'll see the illustrations instructions engraved on their bones.

[Frieda P]

Intriguing, yet I'm still not sure what to make of it, but afraid if I make a stink about it, you might just pull my hair....entertaining read.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thanks Frieda, is about the psychological tunnel of the subconcious and what is in there.

[David Scott]

Did you eat the mushrooms growing in the Red Forest?
Gays? Happy after being in the hole? Ha.
Your so irreverent how did you ever get past the censors?
Did you really have the nerve to insult the "Clergy of Modern Free Will".
Unisexual relations is as popular as unilateral thought. Oh, live and let live. Go into whatever hole draws you in... Just don't pretend we were all supposed to go there too.
Then you suggest Amircan soldiers have a sanctity in their deaths... Don't you know America is the great Satan? What could you be thinking?
Oh, you were just thinking? Ooops.
I must have my opinions written in my bones.

What a refreshing sense of humor. Intelligent as well.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

What censors are you referring to. Gay marriages are legal in California. This was written with the approval of the United States American Military. Give Frank J Grass a call.

[David Scott]

I have no doubt. ;)
Keep up the creativity!
Easy on the shrooms though.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Ok, next time I go to olive garden, I'll tell them to put them on the salad with ranch dressing.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

You can find just about every criminal mind soldier of satan on facebook. https://www.facebook.com/GeneralGrass
Tell him to try to censor the first amendment, and we'll throw the empire state building of writers at his gay soldiers, rotten apples.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Here's a video of Frank J Grass, African American Commander In Chief.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iexuvbvsDe8

[David Scott]

Ranch? Ha. Now that's funny. Especially from here in the Carolinas. :)
Had to go to sleep...

[SquinklaPsyOps]

They are illustrations instructions drawn on soldiers bones by spirits for when they die the guards at the bottom take the soldiers souls to hell because when people join the military they sign their souls to the devil, that is why soldiers don't manifest after they die because their souls burn in hell for eternity.

If you know somebody that works in the cemetery tell to open a grave of a dead soldier and with your digital camera use a macro lense and take photos of their bones and you'll see the illustrations instructions engraved on their bones.

[David Scott]

Sadly, creativity and youth can cross the line of decency. I respect our fallen soldiers dear friend. As much as I enjoy your quirky art, I could not support the defamation of American soldiers.
I understand you seek to offend and shock, but this is nothing new or shocking dear friend... It is an old argument spoken from the mouths of those who do understand unselfish sacrifice...
"There is no greater love than to lay down your life for another."

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Well, David Scott, that is your opinion and you are entitled to it, for which gives me no right to try to change your mind in any way. I don't believe in censoring freedom of speech, so you can say whatever you want, this is the United States.

That said, you soldiers get paid for what you all do, sacrifice is when a person does not get paid. Is the same thing as criminal careers but masquerated like escrement with perfume that is what you soldiers are all about, I am not interested in the hell that you all go through outside the city limits, and if you are expecting some praise look at your paycheck, we don't owe you anything, and when you all die go to hell.

[David Scott]

I was harsh...
I should afford you thevsame respect I would give others who fight their "good fight".
I am not a soldier dear. I could never be one. I am a healer.
I do tend to be protective when I see anyone unjustly characterized...
I'm sure what you say applies to some, not all.
This is still a debate on a world of fantasy mirroring some distortion of reality.

You have a gift for the most intriguing storylines Sis.

You write things that are unique, where people do not think easily of.

You are an idealist at heart, and your voice must be heard.

The blue forest girl is a personality where you do not have to mess with.

She knows what she wants, she knows what she sees, and most importantly, she is independent.

Nice piece of work here.


- Elisa

[sanya]

c'est bonne and sympathique......................................

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank You, simply the best writer.

[Emily B]

I will be looking forward to reading more of you, your voice is intriguing, prophetic

[ADITYA (Deep)]

I think you have just finished this writing !
Lovely.............I have just gone through it.

Very nice ! An awesomely finished piece “I drew it in her soul through an obscure hole that travels into city limit homes.” !!

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank so much for your review, thinking is best to transfer it into comic book story boards.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank so much for your review, thinking is best to transfer BFG into comic book story boards.

[ADITYA (Deep)]

waaooo that would be nice................pls do that. All the best !!

[ADITYA (Deep)]

Title seems to be interesting.............
Sounds like a decor of a freedom+tension free+directionless person..........
so is it going to be a poem?

[SquinklaPsyOps]

That will work "a decor of a freedom+tension free+directionless person".

[ADITYA (Deep)]

Cheers ..........!!