Blue Forest Girl

Safe Inside the City Limits



Outside America’s city limits,
The Red Forest Gays lie in wait,
Outside America City’s city limits,
These PsyOps Gays for their scout wait,
He returns from an obscure hole,

“The Password?” Query the Red Forest PsyOps Gays.

“I’m happy,” says the scout returning from the hole.

“We're happy,” chorus all the Red Forest Gays.

“Did you see the girl?” PsyOp Cyclops, King of Red Forest Gays says.

“I saw the girl.”

“The Blue Forest Girl?”

“The Blue Forest Girl,” the PsyOps scout from Red Forest states.

“Tell me of her dreams, her thoughts.”

“She hates old people for their pessimism. She feels animals should not sleep in snow. She imagines the legions of Hell’s demons being defeated by American soldiers’ souls.”

“Did she download them?”

“She shouts victory cries over their graves.”

“Are you writing on her body?”

“I’m drawing on her bones, the instructions for her soul,”

PsyOp Cyclops’s gay cackle crackles through icicles in Red Forest trees.
“Does she know she works for me?”

“She knows and knows how to make those inside the city limits’ belief in us cease to be.”

“In we?”

“In we.”

“Using I.T.?”

“She will use I.T…She’ll write of us on poetry sites. All who hear her will think her impolite, and believe that all aligned against PsyOps must be aligned with Al Jazeera, aligned against gays and military careers”

“You wrote it on her bones?”

“I drew it in her soul through an obscure hole that travels into city limit homes.”

Author's Note

JP

Reviews

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Interesting... I'm not exactly sure how to take this one, but that is not to say that I didn't like the direction. I think this is one of those pieces that I will be thinking about for a while, attempting to figure out the little nuances between the lines that are just outside of my reach at the moment. I will have to read more of you to become familliar with your voice and concept choices. This one definitely has a certain "singular human being" over "the man" feel to it... I'm intrigued.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Something like fight club game girl.

[Laminators Dubai]

this is something unique.
thank for sharing^^

[wordwarrior]

Hmmm I have to admit I don't understand this one. Too deep for me!

[Michael G. Smith]

Didn't quite understand this. My suggestion, I would this a little better. I was hoping as I read this the gay you were referring to is the happy gay because I couldn't tell.

[Hypnos]

This sort of reminds me of my gods. I have dedicated my profile to the olympian gods, and it would seem your doing something similar. It was interesting to say the least.

[OTownPete]

Slinking off into a corner to ponder this and give it time to register and sink in. Your friend in words, Pete

[KAin]

This is weird, crazy, and awesome!
Amidst the array of voices in this poem, I certainly felt one consciousness superimposed upon it... though what it's will might be I haven't yet discerned. This was a very unique and interesting read, I certainly felt as though I slipped down a rabbit hole.
Nice work, SquinklaPsyOps! Don't ever stop!

[SquinklaPsyOps]

It talks about a battle between fake technology wizards and the real magical world wizard BlueForestGirl.

[Misery]

There is a soul with a story to tell. A true story, but the soul uses parables perhaps to confuse the many who will not care and enlighten the few who will diligently seek. Thank you for sharing the truths you harbor, dear soul.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you for your support, and bless the Department Of Justice.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Theres a gay blue and white helicopter that stalks straight men, that is my next poem.

[Mizo4]

this is very surreal and this is what i like. Surreal writes are good because they take the reader somewhere bizarre and unique. One of my favourite writes from ya :) muy bien

[SquinklaPsyOps]

The forest is the internet, each website is a tree and its fruit is knowledge. There are red trees and there are blue, those colors because they are virtual. The color not mentioned is reserved for nature. Thank you for your review.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Is blue versus red websites.

[zainul]

I enjoy the unique piece that depicts a wonderful picture of the interesting events.
This is thought provoking and enlightening.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you, I appreciate your review.

[zainul]

You are most welcome.
This is my pleasure.

[Aziz Luther]

That's very impressive writing. I love the approach and the picture you portrayed with your words. You made it both message sensitive and still an enjoyable read. Looking forward for more of your stuff

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thanks Joel.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Is about the psychological tunnel of the subconcious and what is in there.