Stranded Bird

On a beautiful day i was coming home from the beach and i found this small blue jay hopping around my back yard.It seemed to be injured,I included a small photo of him

I feel so attached to this beautiful thing

Your not reaching your potential and i cant help but relate

Who needs my help to mend his wing

Please friend just rest and lie in wait






Your physical form is damaged and so is my psychological state

The breathtaking color of your feathers cant be accuratley gauged

We share the same life.Eat,Sleep and find your mate

To me you are a fellow person whom shall not ever be caged





I dread the day in which you regain your ability to fly

You will leave me,like all things i love tend to do

I will also be happy to see you travel into the sky

To say that I wouldn't do it all again would simpy be untrue

Author's Note

if you took the time to read this poem than please tell me what you think

Reviews

[Mikayla Rasmussen]

it was very well constructed i love the rhythm and i love how i could pin it to alot of my own problems and relate. great job!

[natzky]

nice poem Drew...heheh..I agree with seanne' "good things really come and go"...heheh..animal lover.....

[CHRIS ANDES]

I know that feeling
..when I first saw my pet I was deeply mesmerized!!
=]

[Seanne Tholltree]

good things really come and go...