Temporal beings of Evanescence whom can mesmorize so thoroughly, we forget all together who or what we are..
It had been years since They saw each other last Living in the moments That went too fast
He breathed softly I'm her direction The years, to you And your heart, Have been kind
And for me And all I've been through Only has served To soften mine
He paused slightly Waiting for the silence to stir, But when it did not He spoke
Life for me has been a blur Over the spectrum of colour Within which I've been only Granted a few special moments Of sensuality and amongst those Were the fleeting seconds I spent with you..
Defying death And proclaiming love Within the same contradicting breath With which we knew It could not last forever.. Knew it had it to come to an end.. Someday..
And yet, there you were, Living breathing proof that it hasn't
And still years later, here I am Reminiscing over the things
I cannot forget
I remember Hearing somewhere, once upon a time That the blessed were those Who could forget.. No I wouldn't call it torment For it is better to have loved and lost Than to have never loved at all
But rather, I'd say I'm the last standing monument Of the living dead Crumbling, fading into inexistence And tho alive, already dead
Oh life, How will I remember you, When I cannot remember anymore?
Very interesting title!! It goes well with your themed poem, creating a slight chill to your bittersweet words.
"but rather, i'd say
i'm the last standing monument
of the living dead
crumbling, fading into inexistence
and tho alive, already dead"
What a brilliant stanza!! This stanza really jumped out to me, and you wrote it with such depth... Very good once again :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
12 Years Ago
Frivolous treasures, you have an interesting array of intrigues, because in all honesty, the poems o.. read moreFrivolous treasures, you have an interesting array of intrigues, because in all honesty, the poems of mine that you have reviewed thus far, are so dear to me, so in tune with my current circumstance, that it is the most uplifting experience, having someone to peek in my inner world, and experience the depth I try to escape by leaving my feelings, on a loose leaf, but you bring it back to me as if it were fate, with your sweet comments, thank you :)
12 Years Ago
Haha, thank you, what a compliment ^_^ I understand what you mean... That poetry springs from the he.. read moreHaha, thank you, what a compliment ^_^ I understand what you mean... That poetry springs from the heart and soul, so much so that the brain has no time to process or change the pure words of what we are feeling. You are most welcome, always :)
Very interesting title!! It goes well with your themed poem, creating a slight chill to your bittersweet words.
"but rather, i'd say
i'm the last standing monument
of the living dead
crumbling, fading into inexistence
and tho alive, already dead"
What a brilliant stanza!! This stanza really jumped out to me, and you wrote it with such depth... Very good once again :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
12 Years Ago
Frivolous treasures, you have an interesting array of intrigues, because in all honesty, the poems o.. read moreFrivolous treasures, you have an interesting array of intrigues, because in all honesty, the poems of mine that you have reviewed thus far, are so dear to me, so in tune with my current circumstance, that it is the most uplifting experience, having someone to peek in my inner world, and experience the depth I try to escape by leaving my feelings, on a loose leaf, but you bring it back to me as if it were fate, with your sweet comments, thank you :)
12 Years Ago
Haha, thank you, what a compliment ^_^ I understand what you mean... That poetry springs from the he.. read moreHaha, thank you, what a compliment ^_^ I understand what you mean... That poetry springs from the heart and soul, so much so that the brain has no time to process or change the pure words of what we are feeling. You are most welcome, always :)