MY SISTER

Acrostic poem- giving a try

Nurturing the way you care,

Ambitious you are, big achievements awaits,

Jazzy,your presence-little entertainer.

Adorable,Divine and Lovable- heard from every-side

Majestic the way you live.

Unaffected -facing monsters

Sister of mine- that I'm proud.

Scholarly, in your visions,

Appreciative, whatever you do,

Happy-go lucky your way to life,

Excellent, the way you carry yourself

Resilient you are- have confidence. 

Author's Note

Acrostic Poem, my first try.

About my sister.

Reviews

[Silmara McGarry]

What an attractive poem this is, and indeed such an amazing tribute to your sister that she will certainly never forget and forever cherish. For me it does say a lot about you as a brother, and that is truly Sweet!

Nicely done!!!
:-)

[Abraham George]

sorry for the delayed reply. your comments are so nice. for a long time, I didn't write here. but I will.

thanks for your comments

[hemapriya]

The cute nd sweet poem ...such a proud sister to have u as a brother...aft a long tym came across an awesome one

[Abraham George]

so happy to see your comments

[apennylate]

OH....Ik this poet on the site... A very nurtured in a brotherly way type tribute... You can see genuine affection for the name... A well-thought out acrostic poem

[Abraham George]

Thanks for your valuable time on my work and your nice words.

Abram Geo

[Amanda Trerotola]

This is something she will cherish forever. Well done!

[Abraham George]

Thanks for stopping by and commenting over my work.

[Kathryn Mote]

Very sweet poem! Great first try :)

[Abraham George]

Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work.

Glad to know you liked.

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

I really like the theme of affection running through this poem. Tells me there’s still hope for friendship and love. Well said!

[Abraham George]

She is a poet her, Najam Us Saher.
We didnt met, but now she is my little sister.
I love her and she is so adorable.
Thanks for the comments.

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

You are welcome. Keep writing.

[Crowley]

What a wonderful nod to your sister, I love that you have such a good relationship with her and that you tell her through your writing that you are so proud. Great acrostic, loved it!!

[Abraham George]

Thanks bro
She is my little angel, i love her. So adorable.

Thanks for commenting

Abram Geo

[Anjali]

You and Najam have such beautiful bond between you two.. and I just love it. And so creative this piece of art is! Wow. Just keep on writing for each other, and keep on making my day.😅😅.

[Abraham George]

Thanks for the time dear.
She is my little sister, so adorable and lovable.
I am playing her Big brother role now. Because i don't have sisters,even cousins sister.So i am pouring all my towards my little angel Najam.

[Anjali]

That's so sweet! Keep on playing that role... It suits you..😊

[Abraham George]

Hihi thanks Anjali behan.

[Norah]

I have 3 sisters and I don't feel any of what you said about them. But, hell yes, I want that. It is so beautiful to be able to see the way you feel about her and how you view her. This poem brought tears to my eyes I cant say anything but beautiful, beautiful, beautiful, just beautiful. I really loved these three lines so much:
"Majestic the way you live.
Unaffected -facing monsters
Sister of mine- that I'm proud."
And by the way, are the letters starting each line supposed to make up her name or another word?
Cause the first 5 lines make the word "Najam" which means "star" in Arabic, and the last 5 lines make the word "Saher" and it means "watchful".

[Abraham George]

Her Name is Najam US Saher. See the first one who posted comment on this poem.

I am so happy that i can bring tears of joy in your eyes with my poem.

Abram Geo

[The Immortal Phoenix]

(Jeff) I saw your sister once in my bed. You can imagine how this story ends

[Abraham George]

yeah i remember. That day when you try to flirt with her, Along with my sister i was there punching your face. You still alive. I can't believe.

[The Immortal Phoenix]

(Micky) Im shure you havent ever met Jeff in real life you would have died....From laughing