Pretty Girl Pierced My Heart

Sudden loss of a best friend

I found a girl from " Twelfth Night" of The Bard

She pretends that she is bad

But I treated her as my dearest friend

Don't know how, but it came to an end.

I don't know who is Isabella

And Sophia. But she was a Symbol

of Peace, She waking my wildness

That always lead to a mess.

Once i heard her voice

That fill all my voids

Asked her for more

She was never been a bore 

 

Her eyes were a maze

Last she put me in a blaze

Her hair were Icy blonde

Lives in a beau monde

Wish i lose her to someone better

I wish i could write a letter

Without her i am just a clay

Life never make her sad. I pray.

Author's Note

I got a friend and keeping that friendship with her through emails only for around one year.
Suddenly yesterday she said she need to stop our friendship.But don’t think she cheats me. She is still my best friend.

Good News:- After reading this poem she contacted me and told she will keep my friendship and she like my friendship and this poem. I am so happy.

Edit courtesy- Najam Us Saher

Reviews

[LazerRays]

Relationships are very complicated as you demonstrated in this poem. Nice job :)

[Abraham George]

Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work.
Thanks for giving friendship hand.

[wordman]

sweet sentiment,i guess she is tired of a long distant relationship

[¿]

A clue in your message I got is...you still dunno bout the fact that why she doesn't want the friendship between you and her any longer ... I guess you should give a bit hard work to find out...yet if she denies to disclose....two possible reasons can be there...maybe her helplessness nor her selfishness....
Now that you're actually hurt that reflects in this piece....Almighty's grace be upon you friend☺!

[Abraham George]

tHANKS FOR THE COMMENTS AND I WILL TRY TO UPDATE IF I CAN

[¿]

You're heartedly welcome😊!

[Najam Us Saher]

Being hurt and still praying for other person's happiness is not easy, only the strongest ones can do that. This poem shows how self less you are. Wonderful poem.

[Abraham George]

Thanks for your help and comments.

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.