Pretty Girl Pierced My Heart

Sudden loss of a best friend

I found a girl from " Twelfth Night" of The Bard

She pretends that she is bad

But I treated her as my dearest friend

Don't know how, but it came to an end.

I don't know who is Isabella

And Sophia. But she was a Symbol

of Peace, She waking my wildness

That always lead to a mess.

Once i heard her voice

That fill all my voids

Asked her for more

She was never been a bore 

 

Her eyes were a maze

Last she put me in a blaze

Her hair were Icy blonde

Lives in a beau monde

Wish i lose her to someone better

I wish i could write a letter

Without her i am just a clay

Life never make her sad. I pray.

Author's Note

I got a friend and keeping that friendship with her through emails only for around one year.
Suddenly yesterday she said she need to stop our friendship.But don’t think she cheats me. She is still my best friend.

Good News:- After reading this poem she contacted me and told she will keep my friendship and she like my friendship and this poem. I am so happy.

Edit courtesy- Najam Us Saher

Reviews

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

Sorry about that. Your selflessness and affection are well conveyed in the lines. A good friend will stay a friend even with loss of romance. Love is of many varied kinds.

[hemapriya]

..no one is ready to loose tz kind of poet ryt...pretty lines

[Abraham George]

I'm honored,Its never been cornered.
Your sweet words, Like from lords
Thank you with hugs,your words kicked like drugs.

[hemapriya]

Haha...well replied frnd...

[Norah]

I loved the lines and I felt like I could sing them lol

[Abraham George]

I wish i could listen to those lines as a song.

[Melissa]

I love this line about just being clay without her.

[Abraham George]

Thanks for the valuable time you spent on my work and for you comments.
I am glad.

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed this poem.
"Her eyes were a maze
Last she put me in a blaze
Her hair were Icy blonde
Lives in a beau monde"
I liked how you described each scene. The above line. Perfect and amazing. Thank you Abraham for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Abraham George]

thanks for your nice words and i am glad to hear that you liked it.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[AllauraRose]

Glad to hear she contacted you back and you guys are good! I hope it all stays well! Losing a friend is hard, trust me I know, but sometimes the loss is necessary and good. You don't always want to hear that, but if it was meant to be, then it is meant to be. Great job!

[Abraham George]

thanks for understanding and commenting

[Anjali]

She's very lucky... That friend of yours, as you've created such a wonderful piece for her.... It's amazing! Keep writing!

[Abraham George]

thanks for your comments and i'm glad to know that you like it.

[Anjali]

You're very welcome!

[Stephanie M]

I'm intrigued. I imagined a travelling bard from the middle ages. Well written. Great imagery. Enchanting. I'm glad that you, and your friend were able to make up.

[Abraham George]

Middle ages? i am mid 20s

[Sneh]

lovely rhymes are pouring straight essence to the work, worth reading.
-sneh

[Abraham George]

Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work.

[moog-drika]

Sometimes death of a friendship teaches you a lot of things. I lost my bestfriend, I tasted her avoidance and what I learnt is that the only person that you can depend on is you. However the revival of friendship is rare and I am happy that you got that. Great read.

[Abraham George]

Thanks for reading my work and commenting on it.