Dear Sister

Dedicated to my Dear Sister

You are an angel in disguise.

You are intelligent and wise.

Having a sister like you is a gift

Sometimes between us there’s a split.

 

I treasure the moments that we’d laugh together

I try to shoot jokes to make you feel better

Whether it’s a silly joke or corny

You laugh at them to make me happy

 

I share my secrets, coz’ you understand me

You shared yours, coz’ you trust me.

You are always there for me

Good times and bad time.

If I’m not there- please forgive me-

With you when you need me.

 

Whether it’s s silly joke or about that person in the corner

You’re open to me, which I honor.

That smiles and frowns on your picture I treasure

Stays there on your face forever I make sure.

I regret for the moments that we fight

Coz’ I believe that you are right.

 

May be our promises will fade

But sure in my heart you will hide

may be we have fight in many way

But couldn’t have survived life without you along the way

 

If I had one wish, it would surely be

To give you as a sister in my all lives

you’ve been my sunshine in so many ways.

In this world no one is perfect.

But in my world you’re Miss Perfect

 

I am very glad to have you as a sister

You give me tons of laughter

You are the best friend I've ever had.

My gratitude for you has no end.

 

 

Author's Note

Forgive me for the mistakes- Like to get critic reviews to make this more good.- Editing help from- Tabby Mac. Thanks Tabby Mac

Reviews

[Tabby Mac]

I love to red tributes to loved ones. Especially siblings because I don’t have any. The thoughts are beautiful! You started off really strong...near the middle I think is where your words are heartfelt but seems like your wrestling between rhyme and the right words to describe your sister. This is a great first draft. I’d reread it a few times. If you rework a few lines it would really keep the momentum going till the end! The one stanza ends with me almost every line. You almost have it! The message is AWESOME! And the heart is definitely there!! I look forward to your revision!
Tabby

[Abraham George]

I appreciate your comments and i wish you give some suggestions. Please help me to make it more good.

[Abraham George]

And i really love sisters because i really don't have one. I really need one and now i have one cute little sister. So i am pouring all my love that i kept these years for a sister towards her.

[Tabby Mac]

That’s lovely! I shall try and give some specifics! I’ll message them to you!
Tabby

[Abraham George]

i am waiting for that.

[Nora]

This is so sweet of you, actually, your sister is so lucky of you , i wish my bro write to me a peom like this , but he is piece of sh*& lol .
I loved it :))

[Abraham George]

I don't think so. brothers will fight but in their heart they love their sister more than anyone else in the world.

Anyway happy to know you like this and thanks for reading.

[Nora]

I know , he loves me of course, and i do as well , but we're fighting and hitting each others all the time, there is no time for the poetry between us, lol .
You're welcome, it's my pleasure :)))

[Abraham George]

This sister is not my blood related one. I adopted her as my sister. But i care for her more than a real blood related brother will care.

[Nora]

You're such a generous guy then :) , God bless you

[Abraham George]

Thanks Nora.

[Nora]

My pleasure :)

[Abraham George]

its my pleasure to meet you.

[Kathryn Mote]

This is so genuine and kind. Keep writing! Its good!

[Abraham George]

Thanks for stopping by for reading my work. I am glad you liked

[Najam Us Saher]

Wow. This is amazing. I am speechless.

[Abraham George]

For my dearest sister.................