Bon Voyage

Dedicated to one Friend

Today morning, my star-

You’re looking more mature.

Oh my star! Bon voyage for-

Your next trip that starting today.

584 million miles around the sun.

Since you are my star I wish

To see you every morning so don’t

Stop travelling around the sun ever.

 

Like the sand through the hourglass,

So are the days of our lives.

Your age is just a number,
It’s really not all that big,
You have seen two decades,
Since you were just a kid.

You’re not a fallen angel, you’re

A star fell on this day years before.

 

A flower blossomed in late of spring.

Spreading it’s fragrance by words in strings.

Petals with emotions and feeling,

Dripping off as a drop of fire,

That can burn greenery in my heart.

I’m a greenskeeper- digging, planting

Pruning, trimming, and waiting for the

Beautiful smile of my flower

 

Let the candles that hold by the Cake

Brings the light to your life,

Light that will shine and can break through

Any glass, will bring you out of The Bowl.

Light guide us to those stones that-

Can be polished to a pure Diamond.

Let the light brings out the stones

In you ‘n’ let you live as a Diamond.

 

In this New Year I wish you all happiness.

For my beautiful dearest morning Star,

Wish you a Jumbled “Drippy Hay bath”

Author's Note

HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEAR.
late of spring in southern Hemisphere i refer to November. Nov 15 is her birthday.
Point out the mistakes and help me to make this perfect please.

Reviews

[CookieMisfit1969]

Reading your poem made me think I knew her too. It's very beautiful. I can feel how much you treasure your friend and your friendship. Send her a belated from me. Love your piece.

-Cookie :)

[Abraham George]

thanks for the comments.

You can tell her by your own
http://www.writerscafe.org/Najamsaher97
Link to her profile.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much Cookie :)

[Amrita]

Amazing composition..! The way you express in words are beautiful :)

[Abraham George]

thanks for the compliments

[Swagatika]

Its very good.please help me to become a better writer.i want a book of mine to be published one day.please help

[Abraham George]

i am also looking for a editor for my book

[Diane]

That was beautifully done! I really enjoyed reading your poem.

[Abraham George]

I wrote this to say Happy Birthday to my Friend and her name means "Morning Star". If you read my Song Morning Star you will understand what is she going through. Her real name is Najam Us Saher and she is a poet her . you can read her poems also.

Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment

[lostinthewaves]

Gorgeous imagery, friend! I am always excited to read your stuff!

Love,
lostinthewaves

[Abraham George]

I wrote this to say Happy Birthday to my Friend and her name means "Morning Star". If you read my Song Morning Star you will understand what is she going through. Her real name is Najam Us Saher and she is a poet her . you can read her poems also.

Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment

[lostinthewaves]

Oh I love her! We often comment on each others work.

[Karen Redburn]

Your poetry is beautiful. The words create gorgeous imagery in my mind. Thanks for the read, awesome job, my friend.

[Abraham George]

I wrote this to say Happy Birthday to my Friend and her name means "Morning Star". If you read my Song Morning Star you will understand what is she going through. Her real name is Najam Us Saher and she is a poet her . you can read her poems also.

Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment

[Anjali]

Oh I know who this is about. I just love your friendship... It's just so adorable. The poem is filled with emotions and it's just beautiful.... I loved it.

[Abraham George]

thanks for finding some time to read this and comment .

[Abraham George]

And Thanks for understanding

[Anjali]

You are welcome!

[wordman]

and a happy birthday to the star and peace be with it on it`s long travel

[Abraham George]

Najam Us Saher is that star. Its not a normal star. I wrote this to say happy Bday to her.
read moreNajam Us Saher is that star. Its not a normal star. I wrote this to say happy Bday to her.

thanks for your comments

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much Sir. I am really happy 😊

[Raven Moonchild]

(applauds) This is fantastic!!!! :D

[Abraham George]

thanks for the comments

[Najam Us Saher]

You brought tears in my eyes of joy. Thank you so much for such a lovely poem. This is heart touching, you made me feel very happy and special too. No one has ever done something like this. This birthday I feel is a memorable one already because of the words you have written for me. Thank you very much, you have no idea how happy you made me feel. I might find it difficult to sleep tonight. I am that happy to read this.

[Abraham George]

its my pleasure to have you as a friend

[Abraham George]

late of spring in southern Hemisphere i refer to November.

[Najam Us Saher]

I really liked that fact. It was witty.

[Abraham George]

till i told that now , Did you know i meant November?

[Najam Us Saher]

Yeah, I did.

[Najam Us Saher]

A flower blossomed in the late of spring, here you chose a metaphor of flower for me in which I was born in late of spring i.e November. It was clever and I really liked it.

[Abraham George]

for temperate areas in the northern hemisphere, spring begins on 1 March, summer on 1 June, autumn on 1 September, and winter on 1 December. For the southern hemisphere temperate zone, spring begins on 1 September, summer on 1 December, autumn on 1 March, and winter on 1 June.

as per Wiki

[Najam Us Saher]

Being a student of geography I still get confused you know. 😁

[Abraham George]

hahahaha...............