Uncle Bun

Written for a time-pass...........

I have a friend, His name is Uncle Bun

He loves The Big Mac hamburger and Bun

He was from Never-land, place of Peter Pan

He always travel in his own Van 

 

His favorite restaurant is McDonald’s

While his best character was Duck Donald,

Because he love President Donald.

His favorite actor is Sutherland Donald

 

I love my friend from Never-Land

Linkin park is my favorite band

I don’t like to demand

I heard Lost boys story firsthand.

Reviews

[Anjali]

Firstly, I loved loved and loved the creativity used in here! It's just so beautiful, and secondly, the rhyming scheme is perfect! I loved it a lot!

[Abraham George]

thank you.

[Anjali]

You are welcome!

[Jay-LH]

This is awesome, well done

[Abraham George]

thanks for your visit and comments.

[Joey Nizz]

Fantastic rhymes in each line, bro this was an amazing read! Thank you ^^

[Abraham George]

thank you my friend.

[Joey Nizz]

You welcome :)

[Davidgeo]

First stanza, last line - "travel" should be 'traveled'

Does this mean anything or are you just rhyming?

It's an enjoyable read regardless.

[Abraham George]

i wrote it for a contest only.

[Davidgeo]

Um, okay... I'll ask again... is it just rhyming or is there more to it?

[Abraham George]

rhyming only. nothing else

[wordman]

pretty creative write,love the word play

[Abraham George]

thanks and i am glad to know that you liked it.

[Raven Moonchild]

(applauds) This is brilliant!!! :D I could see you having this as a song accompanied with an acoustic guitar. :)

[Abraham George]

thanks for the inspiration.

[Joanna Matilda Barlow]

This was very witty. I do believe that this was a very cool piece. Splendid.

[Abraham George]

hahahah you really making fun of me?

[Write Cat]

Very funny and original!! Amazing!!!

[Abraham George]

thanks. I wrote this for some other purpose.

[Sandipta$]

Donald.... 👍 never land..
Liked it

[Abraham George]

i am glad to know that you liked.