Hope

we all should have........

I love to walk in rain

While am alone in pain

Don’t let anyone see again

That I am crying in vain

 

Only girl that I fall in love

Make her mine forever how?

Always need her in my arms

To feel all her warm charms.

 

I don’t know! She flew away

I don’t know how to find a way

I know I need to be with her anyway

I will find her someway

 

Author's Note

i just wrote this now. No time to correct. point out the mistakes please. Critic reviews are welcome.

Reviews

[Evelyn Ohiomoje]

Aww...! That's heart breaking yet hopeful. Hope burns and makes us strong in that time of despair.

[Abraham George]

thanks for stopping .

[Norah]

This is a really sad piece :( Think we have all had a similar experience at one point.

[AcasualPawn]

Short easy and effective,.
1st paragraph is well thought by writer to hide tears of pain and silent
Loneliness by music of rain...

2 and 3 par show true love and determination and resolve.... A little bit possessiveness..
B
Good poem Abraham George

[Abraham George]

thanks for the descriptive comment and i appreciate this.

[AcasualPawn]

No problem

[Coyote Poetry]

Hard to grasp. When the love is gone. Hope is our last desire. I liked the emotion and the wish in the words. Thank you Abraham for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Abraham George]

thanks for your kind words.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Abraham.

[Jay-LH]

This poem is really sweet. keep it up

[Abraham George]

thanks for your comments.

[Jackie]

This was truly wonderful resd for me. And surely enjoyed resding it as well

[Abraham George]

thanks for accepting my friend request and for the comments. i am glad to know you liked.

[jazzymars]

Good message ang rhyming. Bravo!

[Abraham George]

thanks my friend.

[Jiya]

You are gifted Abraham!
I never can write such a piece in just a few minutes.

[Abraham George]

you can. thanks for your comments

[Wajiha Nayeem]

ah!
so much of love i found in this poem...this is beautifully penned Abraham...
this is like a true emotion that is written here and you have written these words with ease and lots of beautiful emotions i must say!
keep it up...
keep writing.

[Abraham George]

thanks. I just wrote this in seconds and i didn't know that this one will be this much good.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

hahaha...sometimes the things which we don't like are really appreciated by the others..

[Abraham George]

true. unexpected response

[Wajiha Nayeem]

hahahah...y so?

[Abraham George]

i mean about the response i got for this poem. i didn't expect this much positive response.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

oh thts really nice then....

[Hope]

Hope for love is sweet and worthy....
The rhyme scheme too is nice.
Lovely poem

[Abraham George]

thanks for visiting here.