Who is god?

my vision.

God is not what you

Believe, it is something that

 you can blindly trust!

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

"Who is God?
Abraham George,
I see the phrase "blindly trust," in the last line of this poem of yours. All humanity has a faith or trust in 'something.' Trust is a very special word which is not a word given to or toward something but someone alive. The word something in line two should be Someone, If you are making a statement of faith in the living God. Is that your goal?
Kathy

[wordman]

hello preacher,you tell him
hope you have a merry christmas

[Abraham George]

Thanks for the comments. Here i intentionally put something bcoz I didn't believe god as a person. I believe it as a power.

[wordman]

one day we will all find out,the bible says that god created man in his image,he appeared to moses as light that you couldn`t look at,but yes he is a power

[Abraham George]

Also the God who created all this world , we can't make him someone that we didn't give value( The word someone we use to say people we don't know?). Something give some mysterious hidden elements - I hope so...........

[wordman]

and the word i believe is jesus,he has been here since the begining,however the word could be the holy spirit,but i have read references that jesus is the word,they come from a planet called tema,or so it is said in the lost books

[Abraham George]

ok. I think you like Bible . Then you will like my Upcoming book Maxstein. It will reveal lot of myths. Wait

[wordman]

o k,i like the lost books,and i will wait

[Abraham George]

I will try to make it fast......

[Farhan Shaikh]

Indeed..trust in God will lead you to your destiny

[Abraham George]

yes. it will.

[Surya]

True it is...Belief can change all...

[Abraham George]

yeah. we have to trust the God.

[Seeker]

Good, wow! Fantastic you stripped God of any gender "...it is something that you can blindly trust". Most would say "He". Thanks for sharing!

[Abraham George]

God is the power. so there is no need to consider gender.

thanks for the comments

[Wajiha Nayeem]

short and affective....keep writing

[Abraham George]

sure . thanks for your time you spent on my writing.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

always a pleasure.

[Najam Us Saher]

This is amazing. It needs a bit of editing.
God is not what you
Believe, it is something that
You can blindly trust.
If you arrange the words it will be a perfect haiku.

[Abraham George]

http://www.wordcalc.com/index.php
check the syllable count here

[Abraham George]

i wrote it that way but before i just upload check inn this and then i changed based on that

[Najam Us Saher]

It shows error for that link.

[Abraham George]

http://www.wordcalc.com/

[Abraham George]

something have 3 syllables?

[Najam Us Saher]

That's incorrect I feel.
First line:
God is not what you - 5 syllables
Second line:
Believe is 2 syllable word be-lieve
It -1 syllable
Is - 1 syllable
Something- 2 syllable - some-thing
It is 6 letters
Adding that will add a syllable and it becomes 7
Third line:
you can blindly trust will be 5 syllables.

[Najam Us Saher]

It is of 6 syllables*

[Abraham George]

can you check in Google? search for Syllable counter

[Abraham George]

i am in bit confusion now. As i said , i wrote this like as you said, i changed it only after i check the syllable count in syllable counter.

[Abraham George]

anyway i changed

[Abraham George]

thanks for the support

[Najam Us Saher]

No need to thank me friend :)