Angel

A scribble in a hurry

Let me fly like an eagle

Dreams beyond the skies

Met an angel from the paradise

Thou can’t think of her grace

 

I wanna make her mine

Love to taste her lips of wine

Tasted her honey dripping lips

Best toxic drink I ever have

 

Her eyes are like a wave

Which I can keep looking forever

Never cloying or boring ever

Seems like a wild ocean

 

Beautiful smile! Like a star

At mid night. A polar star

Glittering at me . guiding

To the destination I’m heading

 

I don’t want to be a star

Don’t want to be the sun

Love to be a moon! Follows her

Forever and ever wherever she goes

Author's Note

This is just a group of words, for someone maybe it will make some sense i don't know.
this is not a perfect piece of work i know and please forgive me for the mistakes in this.

Just a piece of scribble!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviews

[darkangle]

is actually really good! its not just a pice of scribble

[Harley Quinn]

I loved it. Very well written.

[Abraham George]

thanks for visiting and commenting

[Wajiha Nayeem]

ah!
i loved this work of yours...keep it up.

[Abraham George]

thanks for your visit

[Abraham George]

i tried to write something in a hurry and i never expect this much of positive response for this scribble.

[Sandipta$]

Aankhon me teri azab si,azab si adaayein hain..... Dil ko banna de, jo patang....Saans wo teri, woh hawaien hain...
Loved it

[Abraham George]

i am not good in Hindi.But i am glad to know that you liked it

[Sandipta$]

Loved it.... Not liked it.... 😋

[Abraham George]

wow. i am honored

[z.chéri]

lovely lovely lovely! :) keep writing! x

[Abraham George]

Thanks. its an inspiration.

[Jiya]

Simply amazing!
How do you manage to write like this?

[Abraham George]

Its just a scribble.

[Jiya]

Then even your scribbles are sophisticated.

[Abraham George]

thanks for your comments. I am honored.

[Abraham George]

You changed your User name?

[Jiya]

well yes. The earlier one was my pseudonym. I did not choose to use my real name as i was new here. Now that i got a good response i changed to my real name.

[Abraham George]

i am still on my pseudonym

[Najam Us Saher]

Abraham George is your pseudonym ?

[Abraham George]

yes it is my pseudonym

[Katelyn Kennedy]

Your scribble is my inspiration then. I love how passionate the narrator is for whoever the poem is written about and how you can actually feel the passion through the comparison of her appeal to toxicity. Amazing!

[Abraham George]

thanks for your comments and happy to know that you like it

[CAPOLAVORO]

Very sweet Abraham. Nice choice of words and I like how the sweetness goes from a dream to ideal. :)

[Abraham George]

thanks my dear masterpiece

[CAPOLAVORO]

You are very much welcome dear Abraham. ;)

[Jobira]

A desires of longing emotions is spelled out with sweet and simple words.

I liked it.

[Abraham George]

thanks for the comments