MY MISTAKES

It is not a love story......

Hey! I forgot to tell you

That I am leaving

But never thought that

It will hurt you

It was love or something else

You hide, I don’t know

Why you hate me

For that now

Admitting my mistakes

Happy to have what it takes

Still you are angry

Trying to make me cry

You fight with them in my name

For me or for you?

Your fight made them cry

For me or for you?

I don’t know what you thinking

I don’t know how you sleeping

I have to tell you only one thing

Just like the JB saying

“‘Cause if you like the way you look that much

Oh, baby you should go and love yourself

And if you think that I’m holding onto something

You should go and love yourself”

Author's Note

It is not a love story.

I am working in abroad and i have very good relation with my General Manager(GM). But when i take a vacation i give my Leave Application to my Operation Manager(OM) and after his approval i planed to get approval from GM. But OM directly get approval from Managing Director(MD) instead of from GM. Then GM start to make big Issues and Fighting with the MD in my name only because of his ego

And the best part is MD and GM are brothers

Reviews

[Grace]

mistakes will kill you soon as you let it

[Giulia King]

I thought it was a love story until I read the authors note. It's still a lovely write, very heartfelt.

[Abraham George]

in the beginning under the Title i just mentioned it is not a Love story . i know people will think its a love story.

Thanks for the comments and happy to know that you liked

[Giulia King]

Yeah, I missed that. I guess my eyesight is not the best lol.

[Abraham George]

Also i think last five line you understand. Who is JB and those four line?

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Very captive human emoions on clear plate . Sometimes people behave at own profit Low limited minds can keep us down But we can also get over it I wish you you find good solution for your situation

[Abraham George]

Thanks and i need to find a solution

[HeyItsJessica]

This one is good, well done:)

[Abraham George]

Please go through the Authors notes to understand the situation.

[Manasa.L]

HA HA HA!! they are brothers, then sure to have ego clash.
But you have flown out your emotions through these lines, very heartfelt.
Good writing. Keep the good work coming

[Abraham George]

thanks for your support Manasa

[Joey Nizz]

Thats a good heartfelt write
Emotions are deep in the words
well done

[Abraham George]

thanks, if you dont read please go through the Authors note

[Joey Nizz]

I did that's why i commented.
Anyways, too bad brothers don't get along sometimes

[Abraham George]

this is ego and they have fight before . but now i am just a another reason for their fight

[Joey Nizz]

Don't be too hard on you're self, things happen to a reason and you're not that reason, they just don't get a long and their views and decisions are mostly different.

[Najam Us Saher]

A sad write. It shows your state of confusion and restlessness. I like the way you have expressed your emotions. I liked the last lines too. Truly loved it. Well done.

[Abraham George]

Don't think this one i told to my girl friend

[Najam Us Saher]

Nope. I didn't think. ☺

[Abraham George]

i have added authors note

[Najam Us Saher]

Okay........that's good for clearance of confusion.

[Abraham George]

for that situation this poem is okay?

[Najam Us Saher]

It was love or something else this line doesn't suit with the context of the poem. Aprt from this line everything is okay. I like how you manage to create such a poem in that situation.

[Abraham George]

It was love or something else this line doesn't suit with the context of the poem.

i just need to know that he get more angry only because he thought that i ( he likes me a lot) just avoided him

[Najam Us Saher]

Ah! That makes sense with the poem then. :)