MY MASTERPIECE

Its about one friend i have here.....

I am not an artist

I am not a writer

I am not a reader

I am not a painter

But still I have a MASTERPIECE

 

It’s an art, but not drawn

It’s a poem, but not written

It’s a book, but not readable

It’s a painting, but not painted

But still it is a MASTERPIECE

 

Art with different ideas

Poem with different emotions

Book with different stories

Painting with different colors

That makes it a MASTERPIECE

 

Nobody can understand those ideas

Nobody can feel those emotions

Nobody can read those stories

Nobody can change those colors

That makes it a MASTERPIECE

 

I never understand it fully

I never felt as it shows

I never find the meaning in those lines

I never find a rainbow that colorful

That makes my MASTERPIECE perfect

 

When I say MASTERPIECE it is

MASTERPIECE of everything

A good friend, an artist,

 Poet, Writer, painter

A master of everything " A perfect MASTERPIECE

Reviews

[Silmara McGarry]

Wonderful masterpiece and I love the meaning be hide the words!!!
Great!!!

[Abraham George]

thanks for spending your time on my work.

[APOORVA]

it really is your masterpiece.
what a beautiful creation it is.
my favorite lines are
"
I never understand it fully
I never felt as it shows
I never find the meaning in those lines
I never find a rainbow that colorful
That makes my MASTERPIECE perfect"

[Abraham George]

Thanks for the comments and if you dont know , it is all about a friend i have here

[Manasa.L]

A masterpiece need not be in written form or painting or drawing or any other physical form.
It only needs to be felt, imagined, read as a masterpiece. Wonderful lines "It’s an art, but not drawn
It’s a poem, but not written
It’s a book, but not readable
It’s a painting, but not painted
But still it is a MASTERPIECE" loved it.

[Abraham George]

Thanks

But i wrote this about my fiend here CAPOLAVORO- in italian that name means MASTERPIECE. She wrote a poem about me and i wrote this for her . thats it

IF you check the other reviews you can see her there

[Manasa.L]

oops! I guess I didn't see it well then your friend sure is lucky to have a friend like you

[Joey Nizz]

Wonderful, its absolutely well written and love the meaning behind these words, well wrote buddy.

[Abraham George]

Thanks Buddy.

[Joey Nizz]

You're welcome!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Fully enjoyed stanzas one-three but got a little lost from four onwards. If one does not feel emotion in art it is not art or does not exist?
A very nice tribute though and lovely to see WC folk having such a positive effect upon one another.

[Abraham George]

i have written about a girl and even its an art it's hard to understand a girl

that why its says like that

[John Alexander McFadyen]

In that case you do feel emotion?

[Abraham George]

A girl is a secret book they won't show their emotions and everything as we shows. that it

[Surya]

It's beautiful, your friend is lucky to get one write as such....i liked 2 and 4 stanza most and rest as well...

[Abraham George]

thank you . she also said she liked. i don't know how much she liked

[CAPOLAVORO]

I like it very much. :p

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful, hopeful and good words shared .
"When I says MASTERPIECE it is
MASTERPIECE of everything
A good friend, an artist,
Poet, Writer, painter
A master of everything " A perfect MASTERPIECE"
I liked the complete poem. The above lines stood out to me. We need to be thank for art, song and poetry. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Abraham George]

Coyote i wrote it about my friend here - CAPOLAVORO- her name means Masterpiece. She wrote about me and i just give her a payback
thats it

[Coyote Poetry]

You did well. You create a amazing poem for her.

[CAPOLAVORO]

Ohhhh.. You haven't told me that yours would be a bit long. I could have written mine a bit longer too. You are such a cheater.. :p Thank you anyways.
Hey, change the "That’s make it’s a MASTERPIECE" into "That made it a Masterpiece" or anything like that. :)

[Abraham George]

corrected please check

[Abraham George]

DID you like?

[CAPOLAVORO]

"That makes it’s a MASTERPIECE" into "That makes it a MASTERPIECE" haha this is my poem. Do what I command . :p

[Abraham George]

i did. but yet i didn't know you like it or not

[CAPOLAVORO]

Oh I do like it. Why in the world would you say those words? I am honored to have this one. I am just not good in expressing maybe. :)

[Tbear]

I am sure the friend who you have written this piece for feels honored..I loved the style, the bold, the frankness..really very very nice..

I do wonder if you mean to say 'That makes it a MASTERPIECE ' .. write on abraham..write on

[Abraham George]

thanks. Will that friend will like this?

[Tbear]

What is NOT to like? It is always a lovely gesture..when one is incited or incites another to prose

[Najam Us Saher]

Wow. Very beautifully written. I liked the repitition of the word masterpiece and every line of this poem.

[Abraham George]

you know CAPOLAVORO?

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes.......

[Abraham George]

that name means MASTERPIECE
i just wrote about her like the way she wrote about me

[Najam Us Saher]

Wow. That's so amazing. Well done.