MY THIRST

i am thirsty to drink--- wine=beauty, crystal glass= Girl Friend(Lover)

I’m addicted,

To be tipsy

It keeps me alive

Even without breath

 

Not all drinks

In the world

Only wine I drink

Only Pure Wine

 

After mashing- grapes

Stored and kept for years

Even sunlight didn’t touch

To spoil its taste

 

Bottled in a crystal glass

Labeled with rainbow colors

Laughing ‘n ‘pulling me

Towards, like a magnet do

 

Open it gently

Fondle with care

Pre-rinse my glass

With a small splash

 

Rubbing off those drops

Cleansing my glass

Filling it again with

Pure drops of wine

 

Swirling it, brings out

Flavors and aromas

Smelling it for traits

Tasting it with my tongue

 

 Hey! You are not

The wine. I learnt

You’re that beauty-

Pure wine- bottled crystal glass

Reviews

[Manu]

Quite different and an intriguing piece. I liked the way you have written this. Nice description and comparison. Nicely written.

[Abraham George]

Thanks . I am adding the meaning in MY REVIEW

[CAPOLAVORO]

Love that attitude on the " Hey! You are not
The wine. Short statement but means a lot when you try to read from the start and how does that wine means to you.

This is a great transition from infatuation to true love and care to that glass. Love also the glass thingy it gives me an imagination of a slender body girl lol.

[Abraham George]

i am happy to hear that you like this.
and sorry to make you wait!

[CAPOLAVORO]

Yeaah. Kinda disappointed on the waiting part though. hehe Just kidding. It's just okay.

[Abraham George]

Second chapter of that story is also added

[Giulia King]

This was very interesting! A bit different which I like :)

[Abraham George]

Thanks Gullia king

[Surya]

I like wine, title here attracted me, but I liked your comparisions here....

[Abraham George]

i am really thirsty to have some wine

[Ayvid N]

An interesting take on passion. I liked the comparisions here. Good write.

[Abraham George]

thanks. i will keep remind you about my new writings if you like

[Isabella Ivy]

Thanks for the read request! I like to be reminded to keep up with what you are doing. Well, this wouldn't be the first time that a woman was compared to wine, I'm sure :) I hope it's a good wine! I enjoy how you use surprise in your poetry. I feel the element of savoring something sweet, as well as energy in your voice. For sure your English is improving! Keep up the good work :) I.I.

[Abraham George]

thanks for your valuable comments.

in this woman is not compared to wine. her beauty i mean and she is just a bottle that have full of wine

[Isabella Ivy]

I see! :):):)