MY THIRST

i am thirsty to drink--- wine=beauty, crystal glass= Girl Friend(Lover)

I’m addicted,

To be tipsy

It keeps me alive

Even without breath

 

Not all drinks

In the world

Only wine I drink

Only Pure Wine

 

After mashing- grapes

Stored and kept for years

Even sunlight didn’t touch

To spoil its taste

 

Bottled in a crystal glass

Labeled with rainbow colors

Laughing ‘n ‘pulling me

Towards, like a magnet do

 

Open it gently

Fondle with care

Pre-rinse my glass

With a small splash

 

Rubbing off those drops

Cleansing my glass

Filling it again with

Pure drops of wine

 

Swirling it, brings out

Flavors and aromas

Smelling it for traits

Tasting it with my tongue

 

 Hey! You are not

The wine. I learnt

You’re that beauty-

Pure wine- bottled crystal glass

Reviews

[Carol Cashes]

Oh! After reading the last stanza, I went back to read it again and it works - both ways. Well done.

[Abraham George]

thanks for reading and i am glad to know you liked it.

[Anjali]

Ooh.... Nice! It is quite unique and interesting! I loved it.

[Abraham George]

meaning is totally different.

[Najam Us Saher]

Very descriptive and far-fatched comparison for beauty is effectively done.

[Abraham George]

its meaning is total different and vulgar.

[Najam Us Saher]

Yeah. I got it.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

beautiful it is...keep writing,.

[Abraham George]

thanks for your comments

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Personaly i prefer grapes at nature form Than at form of alcohol But well done . Honest poem with meaning of spirituality and love

[Abraham George]

thanks for your comments

[Manasa.L]

A very beautiful comparison of girl with wine. At first I did not get that but your review opened up the meaning.
Its a very delicate poem like a lotus until we see it through we can't know the beauty of it. Your poem is just the same. You are gifted with such a talent. Congrats and keep writing and keep spreading your thoughts of insight.

[Abraham George]

thanks for your comments.

[darkangle]

well written i like how you describe things vary vividly

[Harley Quinn]

I love it! Your're very talented. The first line was the best.

[Abraham George]

Thanks for spending your valuable time for reading my writings

[Joey Nizz]

well wrote, i liked how you described the wine in your own words.

[Abraham George]

Please go through the review i posted here to understand more about this poem.

thanks for you comments