MY THIRST

MY THIRST

A Poem by Abraham George
"

i am thirsty to drink--- wine=beauty, crystal glass= Girl Friend(Lover)

"

I’m addicted,

To be tipsy

It keeps me alive

Even without breath

 

Not all drinks

In the world

Only wine I drink

Only Pure Wine

 

After mashing- grapes

Stored and kept for years

Even sunlight didn’t touch

To spoil its taste

 

Bottled in a crystal glass

Labeled with rainbow colors

Laughing ‘n ‘pulling me

Towards, like a magnet do

 

Open it gently

Fondle with care

Pre-rinse my glass

With a small splash

 

Rubbing off those drops

Cleansing my glass

Filling it again with

Pure drops of wine

 

Swirling it, brings out

Flavors and aromas

Smelling it for traits

Tasting it with my tongue

 

 Hey! You are not

The wine. I learnt

You’re that beauty-

Pure wine- bottled crystal glass

© 2017 Abraham George


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I agree. A good wine is wonderful. I enjoyed your thoughts and opinion of wine and life. Thank you Abraham for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nicely done. I especially like the last stanza.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Abraham George

6 Years Ago

happy to see you likes.
Romanticly inebriated

Great read

Matthew

Posted 7 Years Ago


Abraham George

7 Years Ago

thanks for stopping and giving a comment.
Wow! i must say, even with out rhyming this one read through real nice and smooth. It was lovely

Posted 7 Years Ago


Abraham George

7 Years Ago

thanks for your comments
Incredibly descriptive and the mood is spot on. I enjoyed reading it1

Posted 7 Years Ago


I don't drink wine, but I've always thought it looked pretty in a wine glass. It reminds me of blood from vampire movies. :) Beautiful poem. :D

Posted 7 Years Ago


Abraham George

7 Years Ago

thanks for the comments. this is not about the wine.
its all about a girl.
Raven Moonchild

7 Years Ago

I'm so sorry, thought it was about wine. lol Rereading this after you said that, I can see it's mea.. read more
What a beautifully written poem! I really love this stanza: "Hey! You are not

The wine. I learnt

You’re that beauty-

Pure wine- bottled crystal glass."

Thank you for submitting for all about love contest!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Abraham George

7 Years Ago

you are welcome and thanks for your comments.
very unique and original way to describe what love can be to a person. I really enjoyed reading this write..
Thank you for sharing


Posted 7 Years Ago


Abraham George

7 Years Ago

thanks for your visit and comments.
This is a completely different context.
And creative too.
Loved the symbolism you brought out.
good poem!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Abraham George

7 Years Ago

What different context?
Abraham George

7 Years Ago

its about love only.
Hope

7 Years Ago

By diff context, I meant the symbolism you brought out.
This is very instilling. About a thirst for a simple bottle of wine. I know the feeling of having a loving hankering for something... it's like a sensation that suddenly hits you. Very well done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Joanna Matilda Barlow

7 Years Ago

It's about Love?! Even better...
Abraham George

7 Years Ago

its about love.
Joanna Matilda Barlow

7 Years Ago

Any poem that speaks of love... is a heartfelt poem indeed.

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