Alone

A love story with a Stranger

Always waiting for you forlorn

Never came to me whenever I'm longing

Stranger from the absence become

Someone for me whenever am lonely

Hankering to be a tulip flower

In his caring hands, blossoms

Forever and ever with a smile

That makes him smile

Florist, not a bee, loving ‘n’

 Caring the flower, Moisten!

Fondling with the angelic palm

Yearning to be in those arms

Once in a blue moon, switched

To a bee, waggling around

Eliciting nectar off! Rolling

With the word couturier

Slow ‘n’ slow as the winter snow

Tears are dripping off

Through my misty cheeky,

Lips that never smile!!!

Author's Note

A love story. If you need more clarification ask me in review. Please give me a review.
Word Couturier--- Couturier means a man who design cloths for a woman. I take the meaning a man who design.Word couturier mean the man who design words- I just try to say TONGUE

Reviews

[Surya]

It's beautiful..your view and you shown it well...
Your title and poem's attracted me and its worth...
Thank you for sharing..

[Abraham George]

I am pretty sure that you didn't understand the inner evil in between those beautiful line

[Surya]

I was saying that your portrayal of evilness between those lines were beautiful......or may be as you said I didn't get your point....but it's my hobby to see beauty in each evil...

[Abraham George]

This poem is total sexual . if you like to know the meaning don't hesitate to ask

[Phoa]

Truly beautiful. I loved the imagery of the flowers and bees. Is this suggestively hinting as the metaphor of the phrase "the birds and the bees?"

[Abraham George]

Thanks for your comment. Its really have a sexual meaning. if you need to ask don't hesitate to ask

[A.L.]

Oh you sneaky thing. Underneath all these innuendos and smilies are lustful actions. I see right through.

[Abraham George]

Everyone have that lust ! Isn't it?

[A.L.]

Indeed, we all do.

[Isabella Ivy]

I see true explicit and sweet poetry here. Some of the phrases are a bit confusing to me, possibly a language difference, but over-all tone and beauty are easily received and greatly appreciated :) I.I.

[Abraham George]

Where you feel confusing?

[Abraham George]

Its my duty to clarify

[Isabella Ivy]

Second line: Should it be: 'you never came to me whenever I was longing?' I'm not sure what you're saying there. Third line from the bottom: Do you need to replace 'have' with 'are', to get your meaning across? These things are hard to tell if there are language barriers. I hope to be helpful. You are clearly a gifted poet! I.I.

[Abraham George]

Thank you for your Advice. I will check and if it is okay i will change.

[Abraham George]

Please check the changes i made .Is it ok?

[Abraham George]

Did you know what i mean by this poem?

[Isabella Ivy]

Is it sexual, and veiled?

[Abraham George]

Yes it is. Actually Not sexual its romantic

[Abraham George]

Do you need me to explain every lines?

[kaylahardy120]

I really like this poem. I like the personification of flowers. I'm not really good at interpreting and understanding poems, so I'm sorry I'm not of more help to you!

[Abraham George]

if you understand the meaning i don't think you will thank me

[Abraham George]

If you like to know the Vulgar inner meaning don't hesitate to ask me