Alone

A love story with a Stranger

Always waiting for you forlorn

Never came to me whenever I'm longing

Stranger from the absence become

Someone for me whenever am lonely

Hankering to be a tulip flower

In his caring hands, blossoms

Forever and ever with a smile

That makes him smile

Florist, not a bee, loving ‘n’

 Caring the flower, Moisten!

Fondling with the angelic palm

Yearning to be in those arms

Once in a blue moon, switched

To a bee, waggling around

Eliciting nectar off! Rolling

With the word couturier

Slow ‘n’ slow as the winter snow

Tears are dripping off

Through my misty cheeky,

Lips that never smile!!!

Author's Note

A love story. If you need more clarification ask me in review. Please give me a review.
Word Couturier--- Couturier means a man who design cloths for a woman. I take the meaning a man who design.Word couturier mean the man who design words- I just try to say TONGUE

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful. Amazing use of words and thoughts. The feel of the ancient writers in your words. I liked them. Thank you Abraham for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Abraham George]

thanks for your comments and i am honored.

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome my friend.

[Joanna Matilda Barlow]

This is about the fact of being alone... hence the title of the poem. I feel it deeply. Well done. I admire that immensely. Well done.

[Abraham George]

thanks for the comments.

[Carol Cashes]

Florists and bees - one moistens with tears, the other "pollinates" hoping to fertilize - love in the other?
Some of you poets write waaaay over my head and as a straight line story teller I sometimes have to work at symbols and metaphors. Did I get it right?

[Abraham George]

i will give you one clue.
Read the last line and find what is that lips.

[Carol Cashes]

AAAHHH!!! You, hound dog! *laughing* I was thinking all you poets had such lofty and esoteric ideas and concepts...hmm...hmmm....hmmmph!

[Abraham George]

so you got what is tears and how the florist moisten that flower!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Abraham George]

also read author's note to know what is word couturier.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

beautifully written..i loved it.

[Abraham George]

this is my fav writing

[Grace]

Love kills sometimes,it will make more pain later on if u keep it in.

[Abraham George]

thanks for you comments

[Najam Us Saher]

You have created a beautiful imagery here. I liked the description.

[Abraham George]

did you understand the actual meaning that i meant?

[Najam Us Saher]

You were waiting for someone probably ?

[Abraham George]

i wrote it for a girl who is waiting for someone and hungering to be with him

[Abraham George]

if i tell you the exact meaning it will not that good. its is sensual

[Najam Us Saher]

Okay.....I should have read the comments.

[Abraham George]

if you need to know more dont hesitate to ask

[Joey Nizz]

I like the true feelings coming out of these words, its really rare to find someone who speaks out their true feelings with sensual words.

Great work!

[Abraham George]

Thanks for your valuable comments

[Joey Nizz]

You are very much welcome!

[MsJewel]

I found your writing to be softly sensual, not really sexual. Sensual is much more appealing to me. Your use of metaphor is very good and although there is a bit of darkness here - it doesn't overwhelm the softness of the poem. Great work! :) Julie

[Abraham George]

i will explain this poem in the description for everyone.

[Rimmee]

Really nice play of words and good manner of writing.
Florist, not a bee, loving ‘n’
Caring the flower, Moisten!
Fondling with the angelic palm
Yearning to be in those arms'

I just loved these lines Abraham.

[Abraham George]

This poem is from the point of a girl.
she wish to be a flower and that guy (who is a florist) moisten her by the fondling with his hands.


Now you will get what exactly meant in those line


Thanks for your comment.

[CAPOLAVORO]

This is a nice one. Maybe you could make another one that is more romantic than sexual. Anyways, your the writer and you did create a good image.

[Abraham George]

Thanks for the comment