Alone

Alone

A Poem by Abraham George
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A love story with a Stranger

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Always waiting for you forlorn

Never came to me whenever I'm longing

Stranger from the absence become

Someone for me whenever am lonely

Hankering to be a tulip flower

In his caring hands, blossoms

Forever and ever with a smile

That makes him smile

Florist, not a bee, loving ‘n’

 Caring the flower, Moisten!

Fondling with the angelic palm

Yearning to be in those arms

Once in a blue moon, switched

To a bee, waggling around

Eliciting nectar off! Rolling

With the word couturier

Slow ‘n’ slow as the winter snow

Tears are dripping off

Through my misty cheeky,

Lips that never smile!!!

© 2017 Abraham George


Author's Note

Abraham George
A love story. If you need more clarification ask me in review. Please give me a review.
Word Couturier--- Couturier means a man who design cloths for a woman. I take the meaning a man who design.Word couturier mean the man who design words- I just try to say TONGUE

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Total love is messed with emotions...a journey that starts and thorns on the path...pricks the feet while walking with beloved or maybe with the memories of that betrayer beloved......Once you take out the thorn may feel relived,....still the scar will remain as the sign of that journey called love......um, am going too deep! as I've never been through such longing....But you did scribble well to make someone feel it!!
The word "makes" in the second stanza...is it any kinda link?! I really dunno..
Thanks for sharing this nice piece☺

Posted 6 Years Ago


Slightly fell on ur wrds ma frnd ...grt wrk

Posted 6 Years Ago


Abraham George

6 Years Ago

thanks for your comments. so happy.
A beautiful tale of love, and loss.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Abraham George

6 Years Ago

Thanks for the comments
I love it! especially the ending, a really great story overall


Posted 7 Years Ago


Your selection of words is amazing

Posted 7 Years Ago


Abraham George

7 Years Ago

thanks for these comments.
Very good choice of words..loved it

Posted 7 Years Ago


Abraham George

7 Years Ago

thanks for the comments
There was quite an interesting choice of words. They really all went together wuitw well.. Thanks for sharing

Posted 7 Years Ago


Abraham George

7 Years Ago

you are welcome and the pleasure is mine.
Beautiful, sexual and tragic= yep it sounds like love alright.

The structure adds to the poem, like love, it starts in one direction but then things get weird and begin going somewhere else.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Abraham George

7 Years Ago

thanks for your comments. i'm glad to know that you liked this.
Beautifully written (and I love the structure of the poem itself!) Thanks for submitting for all about love contest!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Abraham George

7 Years Ago

my pleasure and thanks for your visit.
Absolutely beautiful poem, mate. :D

Posted 7 Years Ago


Abraham George

7 Years Ago

thanks for your supports and comments.
Raven Moonchild

7 Years Ago

Loneliness of the heart is something I have had for a long time. Honestly, this poem is amazing and .. read more
Abraham George

7 Years Ago

thanks and i am honored.

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