Phoenix

A love story

Raise me from the flaming ashes

Give me colorful feathers to fly

To the skies, over the clouds

Looking for a place to rest

Winds brings the fragrance

Of blossom flowers, is thou

Flowing ocean seems to be calm

 Becomes wild, when I saw thou

Without dripping a single drop

While the water- my life- flowing

Thou become a sea that could

Absorb anything into deep

Nightingale singing mumble

Fading flowing rivers’ lullaby

Drops of waters dripping off

Petals of my lovely flower

Even heaven calls me away

From you, never run away

Love to dissolve in your beauty

That’s the heaven I seek forever

Reviews

[Wajiha Nayeem]

ah...great...i have no words..keep it up.

[Abraham George]

i am glad to know you liked.

[Grace]

As the phoenix rise so should life.

[Manasa.L]

Hmm It seems that a bird that is waiting for its mate has finally found it. Its calling out for its love, asking to hold in the arms, warmth it.
Listen to everything it has to say and never leave its side. To be taken care with gentle touch of love.
Very intriguing and well written.

[Abraham George]

i think you have totally mistaken. it have some another meaning too, little sexual. if you need to know don't hesitate to ask

[Najam Us Saher]

A beautiful imagery. Very well written.

[Abraham George]

It has a sexual side . feel free to ask if you need to know. Also read ALONE you will like

[Joey Nizz]

Greatly put, i like how the phoenix soared through these words.

[Abraham George]

Thanks
Please find a little time to read ALONE. You will like

[Joey Nizz]

Your welcome and sure ill check it out

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Well structured!
Beautifully composed!
To be honest, it's really captivating and charming.

[Abraham George]

Thanks for you comments and valuable time spending on this

Read Alone You will like

[HeyJadeXO]

there are a lot of beautifully written lines in this piece .Very lovely .

[Abraham George]

Thanks for you comments

[Rimmee]

"Even heaven calls me away
From you, never run away
Love to dissolve in your beauty
That’s the heaven I seek forever"

I really loved these lines. Nice writing.

[Abraham George]

Thanks. you will like Alone i am sure. please find a little time to read it

[Rimmee]

Yes ofcourse. :)

[Abraham George]

Alone is my another writing. please check

[Dr. YumnaKay]

This could very well be a love making scene you describe here. But of course I can be mistaken.
I loved the imagery your words created, especially here:

"Without dripping a single drop
While the water- my life- flowing
Thou become a sea that could
Absorb anything into deep"

Beautiful lines.
I enjoyed reading it. Good work.

[Abraham George]

Thanks for your comment . Now itself i am changing it

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome! I'll edit my review 😊

[Abraham George]

Read Alone. My fav poem.

[kaylahardy120]

Beautifully written. I love how you write loves perspective as a phoenix.

You've got a gift for poetry!

[Abraham George]

Thanks for your encouragement

[Abraham George]

If you like to know the Vulgar inner meaning don't hesitate to ask me