Phoenix

A love story

Raise me from the flaming ashes

Give me colorful feathers to fly

To the skies, over the clouds

Looking for a place to rest

Winds brings the fragrance

Of blossom flowers, is thou

Flowing ocean seems to be calm

 Becomes wild, when I saw thou

Without dripping a single drop

While the water- my life- flowing

Thou become a sea that could

Absorb anything into deep

Nightingale singing mumble

Fading flowing rivers’ lullaby

Drops of waters dripping off

Petals of my lovely flower

Even heaven calls me away

From you, never run away

Love to dissolve in your beauty

That’s the heaven I seek forever

Reviews

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Phoenix - usage of this bird in poetry always makss me more excited to read that piece!! Here's the same...
I can't define any particular stanza as my fave...cause each made me get a great read...thanks for sharing☺!

[Abraham George]

You are welcome and thanks for stopping by.

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Wc☺....!!.

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of description Abraham.
"Nightingale singing mumble
Fading flowing rivers’ lullaby
Drops of waters dripping off
Petals of my lovely flower"
I did like the above lines. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Norah]

Well you have definitely caught my attention. I love your writing style and the way it seems so natural, rather than forced like some writing can be. I look forward to reading more of this soon!

[Cecelia A. Green]

The last 2 lines are my favourite. Great piece of work!

[Abraham George]

thanks for stopping here and find time to comment on this

[Krutika]

I believe Phoenix to be my spirit animal! I think that bird is very good example of living a life...It makes me realize the beauty of rising from the ashes! Beautiful! Thanks for sharing :)

[Abraham George]

thanks for your comments

[Jiya]

I love the way you compare eternity with a Phoenix.
Just as a Phoenix rises from its ashes and lives till eternity similarly love is eternal.
Keep writing!

[Abraham George]

thanks for the encouragement.

[Jay-LH]

I love Phoenix's , and this poem is amazing, well done.

[Abraham George]

thank you!!!

[Stephanie M]

Very nice. Nothing every dies. We all rise from the ashes. True love can surpass death.

[Abraham George]

yeah and thanks for understanding and for your comments.

[Farhan Shaikh]

This is lovely...I like phoenix..and this is a lovely poem on a Adorable mythical creature

[Abraham George]

thanks for your comments

[Jackie]

Beautiful. And very romantic

[Abraham George]

thanks for your kind words