The Unsettling Sleep

 

 

 

It wakes me and

I rise--

 

I comprehend

the glow of

the outside

 

It is Silent.

 

the accurate forms

of snow

drift and quiver

 

Crusted slopes of

Thoughtful design

 

This be their insistent flight.

This, their song, unearthed

 

 

The uncertainty of Perfection.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Grey]

lovely, yet eerie.
i get the image of waking up in the middle of the night, and staring out the window at snow falling.
you say a lot with few words.

[Legion]

Interesting imagery. Thought-provoking. Visions of birds in flight or sleep in flight. Hard to catch either one. Good work.