Someone

Someone

A Poem by Ablaze
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I only wanted to be me. I literally cried just by writing this. It's not one of the best but I really hope that you'll appreciate it.

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Someone kind,
Someone hard to find.
Someone honest,
Someone drowned in false promises.
Someone loving,
Someone really caring.
Someone brave,
Someone his own slave.
Someone weak,
Someone can't pull a trick.
Someone on his own,
Someone who walks alone.
Someone selfless,
Someone called reckless.
Someone free,
Someone called me.

© 2016 Ablaze


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The repetition is quite useful in bringing an emphasis to the poem. I also quite find it cool how there are contrasts between the good and bad traits of humanity.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ablaze

8 Years Ago

Thank you for appreciating. God bless!
GalaxyGhost

8 Years Ago

You're welcome!

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Added on June 26, 2016
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Ablaze
Ablaze

Philippines



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Hi! My name is MJ. I love writing poems and short stories accompanied by the sound of instrumental music. Feel free to ask me anything. I appreciate comments and reviews. I also embrace constructive c.. more..

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