Motel Heaven

Motel Heaven

A Story by Abishai100
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Stranger account of feelings/events of inexplicable eeriness in the American roadways, linked to a random American motel, with a manager with jagged eye.

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Psycho (Alfred Hitchcock) inspired motel-hell short. Happy Xmas December (and football!), 
DISCLAIMER: This work of creative fiction contains images/references with no commercial/explicit ties to any representative person(s)/body (e.g., Alfred Hitchcock) and is cast as purely a 'personal' expression for social art (for 'open' interpretation).

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I was trekking across the country, this fantastic American Homeland, and I knew I wanted this special retreat for a motel-view, and I wanted to mark multiple motels on the roadway of my journey as tourism/hospitality special, and I found one quite-special motel managed by an eccentric man (more eccentric than I conceived) who always wore shades (Selfie-like!).



MANAGER: Thanks for being our guest this season, miss.
ME: Thanks, gent...I plan to stay here just 1 full fantastic week (haha).
MANAGER: You're very beautiful, miss.
ME: And you're quite the dapper mote-manager (American?).
MANAGER: I'm from Algeria (originally); made some money on Wall-St. to run this.
ME: Good read, gent...maybe I'll invite you to my motel room for wine (Saturday).
MANAGER: Whatever...here's your key (Facebook-like).



The affable soft-spoken American (Algerian?) motel-manager, unnamed, turned out to be an American psycho (damn). I was actually thinking of having sex with him, but I invited him to my motel-room (Saturday's Eve); and he appeared, in a bizarre terrorist-costume and get-up, holding a toy machine-gun. I laughed and laughed and showed him my wine-bottle for us and invited him inside; and I took a shower. He vanished before I got out, and he left this eerie note. Read it.

"Miss, my toy gun was filled with acid...I was gonna put you in a mind-warp experiment for the Eve...I realized you were too precious for it...like, you reminded me of some media-magazine doll or something...my mother (Nina) used to read Stardust (magazine)...I decided to forego the Saturday 'examination' and return to my manager-life...hope you enjoy the remainder of your motel-heaven 'fiction' with us (Facebook-like)."



I fled the motel-heaven scene then. I decided to zoom around town and made for 'discovery' that there'd been a string of strange disappearances (of tourists/travelers!) in that American Homeland roadways-area; and I had to wonder (suddenly) if the vanishings were linked to guests at the motel managed by that eccentric (psycho). I visited a local cemetery and felt pure-fright when I read a tombstone reading, "Here lies Liz Banks, American traveler, once-resident of this US-state...found dead shortly after the day she was to check out of her motel."



"Doing well is the result of doing good. That's what capitalism is all about" (Ralph Waldo Emerson). 

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"Money is everything" (Ecclesiastes)

© 2024 Abishai100


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Added on December 7, 2024
Last Updated on December 7, 2024
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