Hand-Axes: A Disparate Mind (Crime-Story)

Hand-Axes: A Disparate Mind (Crime-Story)

A Story by Abishai100
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Amlan/Raki must evaluate a tycoon who snapped and turned to bloody-murder in the American Homeland, requiring an 'incomplete-distances' reading for field goals in crime-psychology.

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A tale of badness, insanity, and detectives, not necessarily inspired by any true-story or film/book theme or concept. 
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AMLAN: This guy went bizarro and slayed his friends at an autumn pool-gathering?
RAKI: We're the hot-detectives on the case of the manslayer once-tycoon, pal.
AMLAN: Fortune favors the sleuth(s) in the American Homeland, for flares/IQ, no?
RAKI: This tycoon, Mister Rogers, used a silencer to shoot his 'friends' in the head.
AMLAN: Perchance his journal offers some sleuth-cues about criminal-insanity?
RAKI: Me thinks this is social-media real estate imagery for bad-minds stories.
AMLAN: Why the sudden lash-for-hellmouth(s), pal?
RAKI: If we're religious detectives, this is real estate image for disparate minds.
AMLAN: Wow...Facebook like (ha)?



Amlan and Raki, great detectives and sports-fans, decided to take-on this nasty American Homeland case involving a relatively young well-to-do inheritor and fortune-winning tycoon in the Southwest ('Mister Rogers') who one autumn evening, during a pool-party gathering of a small handful of 'friends' from somewhere-or-another, decided to unleash his silencer-agenda by shooting all the swimming guests in the head and then taking arsenic for suicide, leaving our two hero-detectives (Amlan/Raki) to put-together the puzzle-pieces using the manslayer's eerie criminally-insane fortune-reading journal comprised of incomplete-lines to antisocial social-media (e.g., Facebook) culture naysayer-tone(s). Follow along.



JOURNAL_EXCERPTS ('Mister Rogers'): "Suddenly, the protagonist (me!) had the revelation that all the fat-and-phat Gatsby-winnings of the Western worldly variety only thrust forth the hand-axes of evil(s), and it turned me into the manslayer I proudly claim to be...and one evening (very-soon), I shall use this new disparate-minds consciousness to cast the reign-of-hell we see so often now in media, movies, magazines, and mallrat machismo, perchance affording me a special hand-axes 'view' for what's purely an Earthling dialysis of bloody gibberish (for therapeutic pre-suicidal catharsis for purge/democracy)...wow."



Who was this Mister Rogers; and why'd he unleash his criminally-insane anti-capitalism sentiment(s) on all of us Earthlings seeking to wrestle wrought 'incomplete-distances' readings for lifestyle-drawn 21st-Century Homeland (American) confidence for fears and superstitions for social-media 'culture' hypnosis? Was he (simply) a man of a disparate mind, as Detectives Amlan/Raki reasoned; and was this to be a canonical signature journal-representation of the shape and photo-synthesis of funneled evil(s) for deferral (for all)?



AMLAN: I got us this beryl-treasure, from that very real estate of darkness, pal!
RAKI: Perchance it affords us some treasure-view of aristocrats-gone-batty?
AMLAN: In my estimate, this Mister Rogers case has a nasty Manson-edge to it.
RAKI: In this case, we've become the Dick-Tracy aficionado-liners for Heaven.
AMLAN: Without doubt, this is a bureaucracy-reading for wealth-damage.
RAKI: Thank God (all-beryl defined, right?).
AMLAN: Criminal insanity from the dark-side of the Earth (all-beryl reach).



"Doing well is the result of doing good. That's what capitalism is all about" (Ralph Waldo Emerson). 

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"Money is everything" (Ecclesiastes)

© 2024 Abishai100


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Added on March 21, 2024
Last Updated on March 21, 2024
Tags: Fable, Modern, Psychosis

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