Somewhere

Alliteration

Sweet sincere smile shrouding sinister spirit somewhere….

Somewhere, Smeary smudge spoiling sinless soul

Skilful spiritual sermon smothered somewhere……

Somewhere, soulless sage spilling shouting screams

 

Author's Note

tried alliteration for the first time, hope you like it and do tell me how can i improve :)

Reviews

[armin]

Alliteration, a great wordplay and you've very well executed that.

armin. ...

[Abilash Uttama]

thanks brother :)

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

great!!very well done abhi

[Abilash Uttama]

Thanks preet:)

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

no need to say thanks

[Gurleen Saluja]

Awesome!

Alliterations are difficult, but you played well with them. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Abilash Uttama]

It's nice to hear from you, thanks for stopping by :)

[Gurleen Saluja]

You're very welcome. :)

[fattycbreezy52]

OMG!
Your alliteration is as classy as the elegies of the Anglo-Saxon times.
A marvellous attempt.
Keep writing:)
-Fc

[Abilash Uttama]

Thanks FC and I sure will keep writing.

[Arunima]

Alliteration ,no doubt is hard,bro. But you nailed it...and if it's ur first time,then no wonder u will surprise me even more with ur next try!!!loved it...

[Abilash Uttama]

Thank you so much for the nice words.

[nazia]

OHHH the alliterations.... They are simply amazing. word after word you poured beauty on the paper Abhilash....This is a fantastic work. Way to go...:)

[Abilash Uttama]

Thank you very much Nazia :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

this is awesome!!!
alliterations are really difficult you did a great job.
i loved it......!!!
:)

[Abilash Uttama]

I'm glad you liked it :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

:D :D :D........

[prajakta]

great write:-)n beautiful usage of language.

[Abilash Uttama]

thank you!

[Madhu]

Alliteration is always intriguing to me! This one made sense and a nice write! :)

[Abilash Uttama]

thank you!

[sinNsincerity]

Hah, alliteration, consonance, and assonance are always fun to play with.
Great write Sir!

[Abilash Uttama]

thank you and please don't call me sir i'm just 19.