If I Had A Gun

If I Had A Gun

A Poem by ♥ The Other Red Head Named Abigail ♥
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This just came to me.... it was really weird.... lol.

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This unknown pain
Is starting to stain
There are stitches in my heart

Where you hit me with a dart

You are after me

So i plee guilty

In hopes that you will stop

Or at least let the charges drop

But you just throw more

Darts at my core

You let me waste away

I hope I dont see the next day

I played the wrong card

By letting down my guard

I was knocked to the groud

And then kicked around

I was just left there to die
With out even a good-bye

No one seemed to care

I was forced to grow a pair
You leaving me there

Just wasnt fare

© 2011 ♥ The Other Red Head Named Abigail ♥


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Nice movement of words and story in the poem.
I was just left there to die
"With out even a good-bye
No one seemed to care
I was forced to grow a pair"
A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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♥ The Other Red Head Named Abigail ♥
♥ The Other Red Head Named Abigail ♥

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