Care

Care

A Poem by ♥ The Other Red Head Named Abigail ♥

Heart ache after heart ache
Lie after lie
I try and try
I ask myself why
Boom
Bang
Crash
Thats the sound of my heart
It's falling apart
I can't take much more
You f*****g w***e!
Me and my screws up core
Are ready to walk out that door
B***h leave me alone!
I want to do this on my own!!
I'm not bad to the bone
I'm not a hoe
I don't blow
I'm ready to go
Bye mom.
Here I go
You still don't care
S'alright, I've got my Teddy bear
He doesn't give me evil glares
This ending isn't fare,
But I really don't care...

© 2011 ♥ The Other Red Head Named Abigail ♥


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Good movement of words and a lot of emotion in the words. Sometimes best to walk away. Angry sent us to bad places. Silence and quiet can lead us away from the problem. A strong ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on November 14, 2011
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♥ The Other Red Head Named Abigail ♥
♥ The Other Red Head Named Abigail ♥

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