I Am Here To Stay

Salt, ice,

razor, knife,

I've got what I need

to take my own life

I hung for one plus twenty-five

I am still alive

I am here today

I am here to stay

I could take my last breath

but I'm saying no to death

I have been found

I am turnng around

I'm done for today

but oh by the way

I am here to stay.

Reviews

[Balls:)]

amazing :)

[Shiningwolf]

A trouble and a way to overcome it. Very nice. The flow reminded me of a song. This could be written into a very good song if you wanted to stretch it out. :) I love the message in it. Some people should also learn that theres a light at the end to every tunnel!

[laughinglullaby]

wow this was a really great write i loved it. keep up the good work

[brenda]

wow! this is really good sad but it is still good and the words have strong meanings this is awesome!

[WynterPhoenix]

Amazing piece. I've written poems on this subject many times. This is a great poem.

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem told a powerful story. Many ways to torture yourself. Sometime life allow you to see a light. I hope you here to stay. Next place could be a lot worst then where you are today. A very good poem.
Coyote

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A tense and sliced piece of the human mid ad how it works, well done, good job

[Lively]

Nice poem. Suiciding is not losing life but to lose self-respect and dignity of our own. Life is a long chain of vicissitudes. And living is trying to live dark night in the hope of a new dawn.