Will You Be There?

2/13/11

I am a poet, writing about my pain

I am a person recovering and trying to gain

I am your daughter who is trying to learn

I am your sister who is starting to turn

I am your friend, acting like I’m fine

I am a wisher, wishing you won’t mine

I am a girl who thinks about suicide

I am a teenager who pushes her feelings aside

I am a student who knows nothing

I am the one asking you to care

I am your best friend, hoping you will be there

 

Reviews

[♥ The Other Red ..]

Oh...its suposed to say "wishing you wornt mine" but thank you! Ill fix it as soon as my computer is fixed...im on my friends phonerite now nd its very slow... :P.

[You been played Gabbz f..]

A very good write and a wonderfull read In the line that reads May I make a suggestion. on "I am a wisher, wishing you won’t mine" I think you were tying to say "I am a wisher, wishing you won’t MIND" Its a minor error, and its not important, You write really well and you have a wonderful flow and rhythm. Great Job! 99/100

[Miles Evens]

Good writing it seems like you really get you're thoughts out in it
and that's a good thing to get them out in writing some times
good poem :)